Hello everyone !Welcome to China. It’s my honor to introduce some Chinese customs to all of you.
Firstof all,there are many traditional festivals and meaningful activities in China.For example, Chinese people are used to watching dragon and lion dances during the Spring Festival, which shows their best wishes for the coming year.Besides,Chinese people have formed the traditional virtue of respecting the old and taking good care of the young even since ancient times.
And Chinese people attach great importance to their families. Just as the saying goes,“If a family lives in harmony,all affairs will prosper.' What’s more,six,eight and nine are considered lucky numbers in China,while four is considered unlucky as it sounds like“death” .
Generally speaking, I hope the above instructions are helpful to you,and all of you can live a happy life in China.
河南省鄭州金桂中學指導老師 辛會勤
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習作介紹了一些中國傳統(tǒng)文化活動和美德,包括觀看舞龍舞獅表演、尊老愛幼、重視家庭以及個別數(shù)字的寓意等,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,內(nèi)容豐富。同時,使用了豐富的語言表達,如 “respecting the old and taking good care of the young\"\"atach great importance to” 等,字里行間透露出作者對中國文化的喜愛和贊美之情。