2020年9月大學(xué)英語四、六級作文試題評析（二）

賈從永

四? ? ? 級

Directions：

For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on online libraries. You can start your essay with the sentence “Online libraries are becoming increasingly popular”. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

本題要求考生分析在線圖書館變得越來越受歡迎的情況，屬于分析現(xiàn)象型作文。由于話題貼近大學(xué)生的校園生活，考生拿到這道作文題都應(yīng)該感到有話可說。

本文可以寫成三個(gè)段落。

第一段開門見山地提出所要分析的社會現(xiàn)象——在線圖書館變得越來越受歡迎。為了把在線圖書館受歡迎的程度具體化，接下來可以引用最新的統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)據(jù)以資佐證。

第二段分析出現(xiàn)這一社會現(xiàn)象的原因，即為什么在線圖書館變得越來越受歡迎。為此，就要分析在線圖書館有哪些優(yōu)點(diǎn)。與傳統(tǒng)圖書館相比，在線圖書館的優(yōu)點(diǎn)有很多，但最好從讀者能夠直接感受到的方面去分析。比如，在線圖書館使用方便和信息易得。為了使論證豐滿詳實(shí)，這兩個(gè)方面都要通過提供具體細(xì)節(jié)而略作展開。例如，在分析“使用方便”時(shí)，可以指出在線圖書館24小時(shí)開放且沒有休息日，只要與圖書館有網(wǎng)絡(luò)連接，隨時(shí)都可以使用。借閱者也不必親自跑到圖書館一個(gè)書架一個(gè)書架地找書。在分析“信息易得”時(shí)，可以指出在線圖書館界面友好，只需點(diǎn)擊鼠標(biāo)就可以閱讀館藏圖書和學(xué)術(shù)雜志。此外，在線圖書館的資料可以方便地下載和打印。

分析現(xiàn)象型作文一般是沿著提出問題—分析問題—解決問題的思路展開。因此，第三段可以先指出：盡管在線圖書館很受歡迎，但它不會取代傳統(tǒng)圖書館。最后得出結(jié)論：實(shí)際上，在為公眾提供更好服務(wù)方面，二者可以互相補(bǔ)充。

下面請看參考范文：

Online libraries are becoming increasingly popular among young people these days. According to a 2019 study， 84.2% of the college students polled in Shanghai said they prefer an online library to a physical one when doing research.

Convenience and accessibility are two main factors behind this popularity. An online library is open 24 hours a day， 7 days a week. As long as an Internet connection is available， you can get an instant access to a huge amount of information at any time. You no longer need to go to the library physically and search shelf after shelf. Also， an online library normally provides a user-friendly interface， giving you a clickable link to books and scholarly journals. In addition， the resources of an online library can be readily downloaded， and printed if you want to.

Despite their popularity， online libraries are never meant to substitute for their brick and mortar counterparts. As I see it， they actually complement each other in rendering a better service to the public. （168 words）

語言亮點(diǎn)借鑒：

1. Convenience and accessibility are two main factors behind this popularity. 方便和易得是在線圖書館受歡迎的兩個(gè)主要因素。本句是第二段的主題句，整個(gè)段落都要緊緊圍繞本句展開。

2. Also， an online library normally provides a user-friendly interface， giving you a clickable link to books and scholarly journals. 而且在線圖書館通常提供方便使用的界面，只需點(diǎn)擊鼠標(biāo)就可以鏈接圖書和學(xué)術(shù)雜志。normally通常。

3. Despite their popularity， online libraries are never meant to substitute for their brick and mortar counterparts. 在線圖書館盡管受歡迎，其目的從來就不是取代實(shí)體圖書館。be meant to do sth旨在做某事。brick and mortar實(shí)體的。

4. As I see it， they actually complement each other in rendering a better service to the public. 在我看來，在向公眾提供更好的服務(wù)方面，它們實(shí)際上可以互相補(bǔ)充。render a service to sb 向某人提供服務(wù)。

六? ? ? 級

Directions：

For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the saying “What is worth doing is worth doing well.” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

本題要求考生證明一句諺語、俗語或名言的正確性，屬于闡釋道理型作文。要寫好這種類型的作文，首先要深刻理解這句諺語、俗語或名言的意思。本題中這句諺語的字面意思是：值得做的事情就值得做好。它其實(shí)說的是一種認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)的工作態(tài)度，即做任何事情都應(yīng)當(dāng)竭盡全力把它做好。

這篇作文可以寫成三個(gè)段落。

第一段先引出所要論證的諺語，然后解釋它所蘊(yùn)含的意義。

第二段論證這句諺語的正確性，即為什么值得做的事情值得做好。認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)的工作態(tài)度有著多方面的重要意義，比如它讓人在高度競爭的就業(yè)市場上能夠謀到一份好工作。不妨以某位師姐Selena Zhang為例來證明這一點(diǎn)。她在寶潔公司實(shí)習(xí)期間，認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)地對待每一件工作，從而畢業(yè)時(shí)拿到了這家公司的聘書。寫英語論說文，如果在論證時(shí)舉不出名人或偉人的例子，舉出像這樣平凡小人物的例子也可以。

文章可以用建議法結(jié)尾。第三段先總結(jié)認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)的工作態(tài)度的意義：不但有助于找到一份稱心如意的工作，還會在事業(yè)上得到更多機(jī)遇。然后建議讀者踐行這個(gè)道理。

下面請看參考范文：

When it comes to the right attitude towards work， there is a popular saying which goes “What is worth doing is worth doing well.” It means that we should do our very best work with everything we do.

There is a great deal of truth in this saying. Among other things， willingness to work hard helps one to land a good job in todays highly competitive job market， as employers are always looking for people who are eager to give their best at work. Selena Zhang， my senior， is a good example. During her internship at P&G in her junior year， she approached every task—big and small—in a way that was beyond what was expected of her. Her devotion to work paid off when she got an offer from the consumer giant upon her graduation.

Conscientiousness will not only help us find a plum job but expose us to more opportunities in our career. Therefore， when doing any task， we should do it as well as we possibly can. （171 words）

語言亮點(diǎn)借鑒：

1. When it comes to the right attitude towards work， there is a popular saying which goes “What is worth doing is worth doing well.” 談到對待工作的正確態(tài)度，有一句俗話說“值得做的事就值得做好”。

2. There is a great deal of truth in this saying. 這句話很有道理。

3. Selena Zhang， my senior， is a good example. 我的學(xué)姐塞琳娜·張就是一個(gè)很好的例子。這是舉例證明的常用寫法。

4. During her internship at P&G in her junior year， she approached every task—big and small—in a way that was beyond what was expected of her. 她大三時(shí)到寶潔公司實(shí)習(xí)，實(shí)習(xí)期間，她對每一件工作——無論大小——的處理都超出了人們的期望。

5. Conscientiousness will not only help us find a plum job but expose us to more opportunities in our career. 認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)不但會幫助我們找到一份稱心如意的工作，還會讓我們在事業(yè)中有更多的機(jī)遇。a plum job一份美差。