2021年高考文體寫作系列1：感謝信

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素養(yǎng)解讀

感謝信是用于致謝他人的饋贈(zèng)、款待、幫助、以及對(duì)慰問信和祝賀信的回復(fù)。信件不適宜過長(zhǎng)，只需寫明感謝他人的理由即可，信文要感情真摯，措辭得體。感謝信是高考中?？嫉慕浑H性應(yīng)用文體之一。

感謝信一般分為三個(gè)部分：

第一段：表達(dá)感謝之情并說明原因;

第二段：細(xì)述并贊賞對(duì)方給與的幫助;

第三段：再次闡述謝意并表達(dá)回報(bào)愿望。

素材金庫(kù)

（一）常用句式

第一段：表達(dá)感謝之情并說明原因;

I am writing this letter to thank you for …

I am writing to express my sincere thanks for...

I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt（adj. 衷心的） thanks to you for…

With deepest gratitude I write you this letter to express…

I am writing this letter because I am indebted to you for …

I am obliged（adj.感激的） to you for/I owe you a great deal for ...…

I haven't seen you for a long time since we parted last time and I miss you very much. Thank you very much for...

第二段：細(xì)述并贊賞對(duì)方給與的幫助;

It was nice/kind/thoughtful （adj. 考慮周到的） of you to..

Thank you very much for your kind hospitality （n. 好客， 熱情招待） and the honor you showed me during my visit…

It was your kind help that … （強(qiáng)調(diào)句型）

If it had not been for your （help/guidance/ assistance）， I wouldnt have （won the prize）（虛擬語氣）

=But for/Without your help， I wouldn't have done…

第三段：再次闡述謝意并表達(dá)回報(bào)愿望。

Thanks again for your generous help.

I appreciate it more than I can say.

My true gratitude is beyond the words description.

I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.

Please accept my sincere thanks for your help， which I will never forget.

Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me.

（二）寫作模板

Dear ______，

How about your life/ study/ work Im writing to express my thanks for your _____（感謝的原因）. If it had not been your assistance in _____（對(duì)方給你的具體幫助）， I fear that I would have been_____ （沒有對(duì)方幫助時(shí)的后果）.

During the ______， you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First， you _____.Whats more， you ______. There is still one thing that I cant forget. That is _______. （原因）

Thanks a lot for your kindness again. （再次致謝）

Give my best regards to ______. （祝愿）________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely，________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Li Hua

考題回放

（2020中原名校聯(lián)盟聯(lián)考）假定你是李華，在即將結(jié)束高中生活之際，請(qǐng)你給任教期滿已回國(guó)的外教Peter寫一封感謝信。要點(diǎn)如下：

1.老師在學(xué)習(xí)和生活上對(duì)你的幫助;

2.表達(dá)感激之情及祝愿。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Peter，

______________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours，

Li Hua

寫作指導(dǎo)

審文體——感謝信;

審要點(diǎn)——回顧幫助，表達(dá)感激。

審時(shí)態(tài)——敘述幫助用過去時(shí)，表達(dá)祝愿用一般將來時(shí)。

審交際對(duì)象——收信人為外教Peter。

審寫作要求——篇幅100詞左右，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。

佳作賞析

Dear Peter，

As my middle-school life is coming to an end，I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you for what you have done for me during the past three years.

Without your help， I would not have achieved much in learning English last year. Moreover， you offered so much encouragement while I was in low spirits. Thanks to your help， I became more confident and spent more time reading English books. The efforts have paid off and now English is my favorite subject. Thank you for entering my world and I will always remember what you have done for me.

Wish you all the best.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文是一篇感謝信的寫作，文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、要點(diǎn)齊備、行文連貫、時(shí)態(tài)準(zhǔn)確、語言得體、體現(xiàn)了作者扎實(shí)的語言基本功。文章使用without引導(dǎo)的含蓄虛擬語氣、be in low spirits、pay off，以及各類從句，如what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句（what you have done for me during the past three years.）和while引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句（while I was in low spirits），增加了文章的得分點(diǎn)。

另外，文章的交際性非常明確，“Thank you for entering my world and I will always remember what you have done for me.”一句尤為情真意切，體現(xiàn)了良好的交際策略。

寫作評(píng)估

13 questions for self-checking for my writing

Items

Yes or no

Why

How to improve

1. Did I make my position clear at the beginning of my letter

2. Did I put my reasons in a logical order with the strongest argument in the end

3. Who is my reader Will my arguments be convincing to him or her

4. Did I grab my reader's attention at the beginning of my letter and end with an effective conclusion

5. Did I include enough facts to support my reasons

6. Did I vary my sentences so they fit together well

7. Did I use opinion words to express my views and sway my audience

8. Did I use correct capitalization for proper nouns

9. Did I proofread for correct letter punctuation and form

10. Did I stick to my topic If not， why not

11. Did I give my audience adequate information

12. Were the ideas in an order that makes sense

13. Did I correct all errors

再試鋒芒

（2019浙江卷）假定你是李華，經(jīng)常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國(guó)家。請(qǐng)給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表示感謝;

2.回顧Alex對(duì)你的幫助;

3.臨別祝愿。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右;

2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Alex，

______________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours，

Li Hua