高考寫(xiě)作之建議信

張勛

近年的高考英語(yǔ)作文題，應(yīng)用文中的信件寫(xiě)作可以說(shuō)占到了絕對(duì)的統(tǒng)治地位。而建議信又是信件寫(xiě)作最主要的類(lèi)型之一。掌握建議信的寫(xiě)作模式，熟悉建議信的寫(xiě)作方法，牢記建議信的常用句式，可以幫助同學(xué)們?cè)趯?xiě)作板塊以不變應(yīng)萬(wàn)變，事半功倍。

建議信的常見(jiàn)結(jié)構(gòu)：

[開(kāi)頭]

在寫(xiě)作的開(kāi)頭部分，應(yīng)該快速引入主題/話題。在建議信的開(kāi)頭部分，通常我們會(huì)就寫(xiě)信人的某一特定要求給出具體的建議，并用一定的句式引入。此時(shí)用一些特定句式會(huì)節(jié)省很多時(shí)間，同時(shí)也可以減少我們臨時(shí)構(gòu)思句子導(dǎo)致的失誤。

給某人建議

give sb. constructive advice

give some suggestions

show/present ones opinions

make some recommendations

offer some proposals

關(guān)于

on/about/concerning

常用句式

Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on/about/concerning ...

Hearing that ...， Im writing to give you some constructive proposals about ...

I have received your letter saying that ...， I would like to make some recommendations about ...

I am writing to you to present/show my opinions on the problem that ...

連接詞

first and foremost，first of all，in the first place，above all，to begin /start with，in the beginning ...

secondly，in addition/additionally，whats more，furthermore，moreover，more importantly，in the next place ...

lastly，finally，in the end，at last，eventually，last but not （the） least，most importantly ...

[主體]

在寫(xiě)作的主體部分，一是要使用多樣的句式來(lái)豐富文章的表達(dá)，二是要把所有的要點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)確、清晰地表達(dá)出來(lái)，從而使文章完整。同樣是提出建議，我們可以有很多不同的表達(dá)。

常用句式

I would like to suggest/recommend that ...

One suggestion/recommendation is that you should ...

You are supposed to do ...

You would be wise to do ...

If I were you， I would do ...

It would be a good idea/beneficial if you could ...

[結(jié)尾]

在寫(xiě)作的結(jié)尾部分，應(yīng)該干脆利落，簡(jiǎn)潔有力，就像豹子的尾巴一樣。

常用句式

I hope you will find these proposals useful and practical.

I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into account/consideration.

If you want any further information， please contact me.

（I am） waiting for/awaiting your good news.

Your early reply will be highly appreciated.

Wish you good health/happiness./May you be happy.

Hope everything goes well with you.

Hope/Wish you all the best.

[模板]

Dear xxx，

How are you？ Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice concerning on/about how to _________. My suggestions are as follows. （寫(xiě)信目的）

First of all， you are supposed to ________. Besides/additionally/in addition， it will be a good idea if you could _________. Furthermore， I would like to recommend that _________. Lastly， if I were you， I would _________. （詳列建議）endprint

I hope that you will find these proposals practical. Im looking forward to hearing from you again. （希望與祝愿）

Yours，

Xxx

[實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練]

假如你是李華，一年高考結(jié)束，新的高三又開(kāi)始了。你的同學(xué)王偉新入高三，感到壓力很大，寫(xiě)信向你求助。請(qǐng)你給他回一封信，內(nèi)容包括如下建議：

1. 設(shè)立合理的目標(biāo)；

2. 保持良好的心態(tài)；

3. 在運(yùn)動(dòng)中釋放壓力；

4. 多與老師父母溝通。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100詞左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

要點(diǎn)分解

1. 新入高三，感到壓力很大；

2. 設(shè)立合理的目標(biāo)，這樣可以……；

3. 保持良好的心態(tài)，沒(méi)有好的心態(tài)就會(huì)……；

4. 在運(yùn)動(dòng)中釋放壓力；

5. 跟老師父母多交流，他們經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富……。

[范文]

Dear Wang Wei，

How are you？ Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice concerning how to deal with the great pressure for entering grade 3 leads to your suffering from great stress. My suggestions are as follows.

First of all， you are supposed to have a goal， for it would be beneficial if you could set up a practical one that is achievable， thus building up your confidence. Additionally， it will be a good idea if you could maintain a good state of mind， without which you would be easily defeated， even when faced with a little quiz. Furthermore， I would like to recommend that you do proper exercise because it is a good way to relieve your stress in sports with your arms and legs stretched out. Lastly， if I were you， I would pour out my trouble to my teachers as well as my parents. So experienced are they that they will definitely help you out.

I hope that you will find these proposals helpful. Im looking forward to hearing from you again.

Sincerely yours，

Li Huaendprint