如何寫(xiě)提建議的英語(yǔ)作文

提建議，也是中考英語(yǔ)作文?？荚掝}。寫(xiě)此類作文時(shí)，可以先提出具體問(wèn)題，然后用含有should或shouldn't等句子提出相應(yīng)的建議。

1.寫(xiě)作目標(biāo)

假如你的朋友Tom遇到了一些問(wèn)題，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文，說(shuō)明他的問(wèn)題及解決辦法。

2.素材積累

【教材原句】

（1）Students these days often have a lot of worries.（開(kāi)頭句） （2）I don't know what to do about going to Mike’s birthday party tomorrow night.（開(kāi) 頭句） （3）If we do that，more people will want to play the games.（中間句） （4）Also，I’m not sure how to go to the party.（中間句） （5）Can you give me some advice please？（結(jié)尾句）

【課外典句】

（1）I hope you can give me some advice on what to do with my worries.（開(kāi)頭句） （2）I won't leave until they ask me to do.（中間句）

（3）I should do anything as they ask me to do.（中間句） （4）If you can come，you'll have a good time.（結(jié)尾句）

3.思路點(diǎn)撥

首先要開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，指出Tom有三個(gè)問(wèn)題；然后分層敘述他的問(wèn)題及解決方法；最后提出希望，希望他盡快解決問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作時(shí)以第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主。

4.寫(xiě)作提綱

開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題：My friend Tomhas three problems.

分層敘述：One problem is... I think he should...If he ...he wil... His second problemis..Idon't think he.. His third problem is...I thinkhe should...

總結(jié)全文：I hope he can solve all his problems soon and .

5.妙筆生花

My friend Tom has three problems.His first problemis that he is too heavy.Ithink he should eat less junk food and more vegetables.If he does more exercise，he willbe thin.

His second problem is that he is always late for school.Idon't think he should stay up late.If he buys an alarm clock，he may never be late.

Histhird problemis that hehada fight with hisbestfrienda few daysago.Itwas just a misunderstanding.I think he should have a talk with his best friend and try to work things out.

I hope he can solve all his problems soon and have a happy life forever.

6.實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練

（1）（2024·內(nèi)蒙古·呼倫貝爾盟）

假如你是李明，你的英國(guó)筆友Mike飽受肥胖的困擾，他向你求助，詢問(wèn)如何保持健康。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，給他回復(fù)一封郵件。

要點(diǎn)提示：

① 多吃水果和蔬菜；

② 堅(jiān)持每天鍛煉，但是要適量；③ 保證充足的睡眠，不熬夜；④ 其他…

要求：

① 詞數(shù)90左右（郵件的格式、開(kāi)頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

② 要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

③ 文中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名、校名等個(gè)人信息。

Dear Mike，

I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your weight.I’d like to share some goodways to keep healthywith you.

I hope these rules will be useful to you.

Yours， Li Ming

參考范文：

Dear Mike，

I' m sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your weight. I'd like to share some good ways to keep healthy with you.

First，you should eat more fruits and vegetables.You shouldn't eat fast food，such as hamburgers and chips.Eating too much of them may be harmful to your health.Second，do exercise every day.Find out your favorite sport and keep doing it.But remember not to do too much at one time.Third，get enough sleep.As a teenager，you should sleep for at least 8 hours every day.Never stay up too late.Finally，you should try to do things that make you happy such as talking with your friends and enjoying a relaxing movie.

I hope these rules will be useful to you. Yours，

Li Ming

（2）（2024·吉林）

當(dāng)我們遇到自己無(wú)法解決的問(wèn)題或煩惱時(shí)，應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)積極向他人尋求幫助。請(qǐng)以\"AskingforHelp\"為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

內(nèi)容包括：① 積極應(yīng)對(duì)問(wèn)題或煩惱的必要性;

② 尋求幫助的益處；

③ 結(jié)合生活經(jīng)歷，簡(jiǎn)述你或他人尋求幫助的一個(gè)事例;

④ 提供尋求幫助的方法（至少兩個(gè)）。

寫(xiě)作要求：① 語(yǔ)言流暢，層次清晰，內(nèi)容可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

② 詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

③ 書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔；

④ 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

Askingfor Help

There might be some problems or worries in life.

參考范文：

Askingfor Help

There might be some problems or worries in life.When we meet problems or troubles that we cannot solve ourselves，we should learn to actively get help from others.It’s important to ask for help，and it will help you relax.

Lastyear，my English grammar was weak.Because of this problem，my English was not good.So Iwent toask my English teacherfor help.With the helpof my teacherand my own efforts，my English score has improved.Now I've really learned how to learn lessons myself.

In a word，it is normal to have problems.When we meet problems，we should ask people around us for help，such as teachers，classmates or parents.In addition，we should also search the Internet for solutions.