【話題分析】
傳統(tǒng)文化是一個(gè)國(guó)家文化遺產(chǎn)和身份認(rèn)同的支柱,它包括世代相傳的價(jià)值觀、信仰、習(xí)俗和節(jié)日。中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化源遠(yuǎn)流長(zhǎng)、博大精深。傳統(tǒng)文化的氣息在我們生活中隨時(shí)能感受到,它跳動(dòng)在民族樂器哀婉而凄美的琴弦上,閃爍在國(guó)粹京劇色彩斑斕的臉譜上,綻放在異彩紛呈的民俗節(jié)日中,傳揚(yáng)在膾炙人口的中華詩詞里…總之,傳統(tǒng)文化滲透于我們生活中的各個(gè)方面。將中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化與英語閱讀寫作結(jié)合在一起考查,是近年來中考英語命題的一個(gè)新趨勢(shì)。
【寫作任務(wù)】
假定你是李華,上周你們學(xué)校開展了“弘揚(yáng)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化”活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的圖表提示,為學(xué)校英文網(wǎng)站寫一篇活動(dòng)報(bào)道,介紹活動(dòng)情況以及同學(xué)們參與活動(dòng)的感受。
寫作要求:1.文中應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使文章連貫。
2.文中不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。
3.詞數(shù)100左右,短文開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
SpreadingChinese TraditionalCulture
Recently our school held an activity on spreading Chinese traditional culture.
【技巧點(diǎn)撥】
這是材料提示性書面表達(dá)試題,寫作體裁是說明文。試題要求以李華的名義,根據(jù)圖表信息內(nèi)容,為學(xué)校英文網(wǎng)站寫一篇活動(dòng)報(bào)道,介紹此次活動(dòng)及其參與活動(dòng)的感受。
寫作話題屬于“人與社會(huì)\"主題范疇中的“傳統(tǒng)文化”,涉及子主題“歷史、社會(huì)與文化”以及“文學(xué)、藝術(shù)與體育”。寫作內(nèi)容主要涉及“世界主要國(guó)家的文化習(xí)俗與文化景觀、節(jié)假日與慶?;顒?dòng);中外影視、戲劇、音樂、舞蹈、繪畫、建筑藝術(shù)形式中的文化價(jià)值和作品賞析”,這些內(nèi)容都與我們?nèi)粘W(xué)習(xí)生活密切相關(guān),我們有大量的素材可寫。
針對(duì)本文最好采取如下導(dǎo)圖方法來寫作:
第一段:直入主題,介紹 ..Ittookplace in the schoolhall from2:00 舉辦弘揚(yáng)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化 p.m to 5:00 p.m on Oct 26th. 的活動(dòng)和時(shí)間 There were three activities on that day. A quarter of us students took part in Spreading Chinese 第二段:介紹活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容 listening to Beijing Opera.
Traditional Culture 及參與者 (20 30% of us chose Making Paper-cutting. And the rest of us enjoyed ourselves in... We spoke highly of the activity. 第三段:表達(dá)參加活動(dòng)的 We hope more and more people can join 感受及其建議 us to spread...
【詞句積累】
寫作中,會(huì)用到的詞語有:take place,take part in,listen to,be fond of,speak highly of, not only...but also...
經(jīng)典句型有:
1.They think itisvery charming.(賓語從句) 2.And the rest of us enjoyed ourselves in Introducing Favourite Chinese Classic becausetheywere fondof those famousbooks.(because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句)
3. We not only learned a lot through this activity,but also realized the importance of protecting our traditional culture.(not only..but also并列句)
4. We hope more and more people can join us to spread our culture and protect our culture.(賓語從句)
【范文欣賞】
SpreadingChinese Traditional Culture
Recently our school held an activity on spreading Chinese traditional culture. ① 業(yè) took place in the school hall from 2:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m. on Oct. 26th.
There were three activities on that day.A quarter of us students took part in listening to Beijing Opera. They think it is very charming. 30% of us chose Making Paper-cutting. They made really beautiful cuttings. ② And the rest of us enjoyed ourselves in Introducing Favourite Chinese Classic because they were fond of those famous books.
We spoke highly of the activity. ③ We not only learned a lot through this activity, but also realized the importance of protecting our traditional culture. ④ We hope more and more people can join us to spread our culture and protect our culture.
【亮點(diǎn)分析】
① 承接前句語境,直入主題,句中詞語\"takeplace,from...to\"等的使用,表明了舉辦活動(dòng)的時(shí)間。
② 用連接詞because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句,充分表達(dá)了參與活動(dòng)的理由,短語\"therestof\"和\"befondof\"的運(yùn)用,增強(qiáng)了語言的表達(dá)力。
③ 用\"notonly...butalso\"連接并列句,更進(jìn)一步強(qiáng)調(diào)了保護(hù)傳統(tǒng)文化的重要性。
④ 本句是賓語從句,其中\(zhòng)"比較結(jié)構(gòu)more and more\"及\"to spread...protect...不定式短語作目的狀語”的綜合運(yùn)用,凸顯了作者具有扎實(shí)的語言運(yùn)用能力。
【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
作者對(duì)圖表信息進(jìn)行了描述,涵蓋所有要點(diǎn),層次清晰、重點(diǎn)突出,尤其對(duì)數(shù)據(jù)的介紹既有細(xì)致說明又有總體評(píng)價(jià),很全面。作者在寫作時(shí)進(jìn)行了合理的發(fā)揮,使用句式靈活多變,包括because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句、not only..but also引導(dǎo)的并列句、省略that的賓語從句、more and more比較級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)等,邏輯通順,表達(dá)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)氐馈W髡咄瑫r(shí)運(yùn)用了許多高級(jí)詞匯,如 take place,take part in,be fond of等,使句子通順自然、表意明確,很有說服力。
初中生學(xué)習(xí)指導(dǎo)·中考版2025年5期