Neighbours

鄭云

Reading

You should try to have a good relationship with your neighbours， because you neverknow when you need their help. If they do something to make you sad or angry， it is better todiscuss it in a friendly way than argue about it. For example， if your neighbours are playingloud music that you do not like， ask them politely to turn the music down instead of angrilysaying you will call the police if they do not turn it off.

Trees and fences can also be a cause of disagreements between neighbours. Mygrandmother liked to sit out in the sun after lunch， but her neighbour had put up a highfence that made a shadow over her front yard in the early afternoon. She did not want toargue with him， because he had given her a lot of help since my grandfather died.

As last， my grandmother thought out a great idea. She invited her neighbour for dinnerand shared her idea with him. He could make the fence lower enough to give her some sunwithout losing his privacy. In return， she would cut down the tree that reached to his gardenand dropped leaves all over his yard in the autumn.

The neighbour agreed on the idea， and then they lived in peace.

wordlist

relationship n. 關(guān)系argue v. 爭(zhēng)論instead of 而不是

fence n. 柵欄cause n. 原因disagreement n. 分歧

shadow n. 陰影l(fā)ow adj. 低的privacy n. 隱私

Note

文中畫線句“if your neighbours are playing loud music that you do not like...”是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，其中“that you do not like”是定語(yǔ)從句修飾“music”，“ask thempolitely to turn the music down”是主句，“instead of angrily saying you will call the police ifthey do not turn it off”是狀語(yǔ)，而“you will call the police if they do not turn it off”是“say”的賓語(yǔ)，該賓語(yǔ)是賓語(yǔ)從句，從句中含有一個(gè)if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句。

Tasks

1. What is the main idea of this passage？

A. We shouldnt argue with neighbours.

B. Good communication helps solve problems.

C. We can invite our neighbours for dinner to solve problems.

2. 請(qǐng)說(shuō)一說(shuō)關(guān)于“鄰居”的諺語(yǔ)。

Writing

俗話說(shuō)：“遠(yuǎn)水不解近渴，遠(yuǎn)親不如近鄰。”假如你是Mike，住在光明社區(qū)，你們學(xué)校的?？谂e辦主題為“My neighbourhood”的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖，寫一篇文章投稿。

原文呈現(xiàn)

My neighbourhood

My name is Mike. I live in SunshineNeighbourhood in the centre of the city. Itis small but beautiful. You can enjoy theflowers on both sides of the path whenwalking on it.

My neighbours are all kind. Theyalways give a helping hand to me when I amin trouble. For example， once I fell downfrom my bike because I rode too fast. One ofmy neighbours saw me. He quickly foundout what happened and sent me to hospital.He often shares his printer with us.

There is a large square behind my flat.I always have fun playing badminton withmy friends on weekends.

This is my neighbourhood. I am luckyto live in a neighbourhood full of love likethis.

升格展示

My neighbourhood

My name is Mike. I live in Guangming Community in the centre of the city. It is smallbut beautiful. There is a big square， a small river and some tall buildings in it. I can enjoydifferent kinds of flowers in the four seasons.

My neighbours are kind and helpful. They always give a helping hand to me when Iam in trouble. For example， once I fell off my bike and was hurt badly on my way toschool. One of my neighbours saw what happened and sent me to hospital. Besides， whenwe students need to print papers at home， our neighbours are always willing to share theirprinters with us.

At weekends， I usually have fun playing badminton with my friends in the square，and sometimes I also help clean up the square and roads to keep our neighbourhood cleanand tidy.

This is my neighbourhood. I am lucky to live in a neighbourhood full of love like this.

綜合點(diǎn)評(píng)

本篇書面表達(dá)的主題是介紹自己生活的小區(qū)，全文緊扣主旨，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。每段要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容鮮明，重點(diǎn)突出。升格作文中，小作者除增加了具體事例來(lái)刻畫好鄰居的形象，還使用了過(guò)渡詞使語(yǔ)篇語(yǔ)言更具邏輯性。全文句式豐富，透過(guò)小作者筆下的句子，光明社區(qū)居民互幫互助的形象躍然紙上。我們也體會(huì)到了小作者生活在小區(qū)里發(fā)自內(nèi)心的幸福感。