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謝期繁　呂　佳　程小明等

（1）

你校廣播站就改革開(kāi)發(fā)21周年成果向同學(xué)們征英文稿，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖就改革開(kāi)放30年來(lái)交通工具的變化寫(xiě)一份廣播稿。

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1. 改革開(kāi)放以來(lái)，人們的生活發(fā)生了巨大的變化，交通工具的變化是一個(gè)方面；

2. 改革開(kāi)放初期，人們以擁有一輛自行車(chē)而自豪；

3. 到了90年代，摩托車(chē)已經(jīng)普及到普通百姓家庭；

4. 到了現(xiàn)在，私家車(chē)的數(shù)量在不斷地增加，給人們的生活帶來(lái)了方便；

5. 作為中學(xué)生，你應(yīng)怎么做。

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（佛山市南海區(qū)石門(mén)中學(xué)獅山校區(qū)謝期繁）

（2）

下面是美國(guó)新當(dāng)選總統(tǒng)奧巴馬的生活圖片。

[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容] 假定某周報(bào)的英語(yǔ)習(xí)作欄向你征稿，介紹美國(guó)新當(dāng)選的總統(tǒng)奧巴馬。請(qǐng)根據(jù)就以上表格中的內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一

篇介紹奧巴馬的征文稿。

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（佛山市南海區(qū)石門(mén)中學(xué)獅山校區(qū)謝期繁）

（3）

為豐富學(xué)生校園生活，你校舉辦了一次藝術(shù)周活動(dòng)，活動(dòng)內(nèi)容如下：

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假設(shè)你是校報(bào)記者，寫(xiě)一篇簡(jiǎn)訊報(bào)道這次活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 本次活動(dòng)的概況(名稱、時(shí)間、目的)；

2. 介紹臺(tái)上和操場(chǎng)上的活動(dòng)；

3. 介紹環(huán)保及特色；

4. 介紹創(chuàng)新活動(dòng)及特色；

5. 收獲或感想。

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（深圳市寶安中學(xué)程小明）

（4）

假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Jack聽(tīng)說(shuō)你從去年開(kāi)始鍛煉身體，發(fā)了封電子郵件給你詢問(wèn)有關(guān)情況。以下是鍛煉給你的生活和學(xué)習(xí)帶來(lái)的變化。

[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容] 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)上表提供的信息，寫(xiě)一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 鍛煉前的方式及效果；

2. 鍛煉后的方式及在學(xué)習(xí)和健康方面的效果；

3. 自信心和交友方面的影響；

4. 結(jié)論；

5. 感想。

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Dear Jack,

How nice to hear from you again. You want to know something about my physical training.

…

Best wishes,

Li Hua

（深圳市寶安中學(xué)程小明）

（5）

對(duì)于一份有關(guān)幸福的抽樣調(diào)查來(lái)說(shuō)，1500多名國(guó)人對(duì)于自己是否幸福的打分平均成績(jī)是64.97(滿分是100)。調(diào)查發(fā)現(xiàn)，身份不同，幸福指數(shù)不同。

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請(qǐng)根據(jù)調(diào)查內(nèi)容及以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一份簡(jiǎn)報(bào)。

1. 簡(jiǎn)單概括該表格反映的調(diào)查結(jié)果；

2. 專家指出，每天保持平和的心態(tài)，建立良好的人際關(guān)系以及學(xué)會(huì)分享，是提升幸福指數(shù)的關(guān)鍵；

3. 給出1-2個(gè)你認(rèn)為可以讓自己更快樂(lè)的建議。

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參考詞匯：幸福指數(shù)happiness quotient 下崗人員 layoff

1500 Chinese took part in an survey about how happy they are and got an average score of 64.97.

…

（廣州執(zhí)信中學(xué)呂佳）

（6）

下面是一個(gè)生活中的場(chǎng)景：

有個(gè)老人在河邊釣魚(yú)，老人技巧純熟，所以沒(méi)多久就釣上了滿簍的魚(yú)。一個(gè)小孩走過(guò)去看他釣魚(yú)，老人要把整簍的魚(yú)送給他，小孩搖搖頭.老人驚異的問(wèn)道：“你為何不要？”小孩回答：“我想要你手中的釣魚(yú)竿, 這簍魚(yú)沒(méi)多久就吃完了，要是我有釣竿，我就可以自己釣，一輩子也吃不完?！?/p>

[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]

1. 把事情描述出來(lái)；

2. 這篇小品給你的啟示。

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參考詞匯：釣魚(yú)竿fish pole

（廣州執(zhí)信中學(xué)呂佳）

（7）

你的美國(guó)朋友Mike是一個(gè)中國(guó)迷，他來(lái)信表示很想了解中國(guó)的情況。在剛剛過(guò)去的一年里，中國(guó)發(fā)生了很多大事，總結(jié)起來(lái)主要有如下事件：

1. 年初：湖南、貴州等地大雪災(zāi)，經(jīng)濟(jì)損失嚴(yán)重；

2. 五月十二日四川大地震，傷亡慘重，震驚全球；

3. 九月十二日神Ⅶ升天；

4. 八月成功舉辦奧運(yùn)會(huì)；

5. 年底：全球經(jīng)濟(jì)危機(jī)，中國(guó)經(jīng)濟(jì)受影響，中國(guó)政府和人民有決心戰(zhàn)勝困難。

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Dear Mike,

Im very glad to have received your letter. Now let me tell you about the main events in China in 2008.

…

Best wishes,

Mary

（東莞市高埗中學(xué)張寒平楊杰鋒）

（8）

美國(guó)《僑報(bào)》2008年12月17日?qǐng)?bào)道了16日晚在中國(guó)駐美使館舉辦的中美建交30周年慶祝酒會(huì)上發(fā)生了令人遺憾的一幕：在嘉賓致辭的時(shí)候，臺(tái)下華人高聲談笑，人聲嘈雜，仿若一個(gè)鬧市，以致嗓音本來(lái)就有點(diǎn)沙啞的美國(guó)財(cái)長(zhǎng)鮑爾森不得不以高八度的調(diào)門(mén)，來(lái)祝賀美中建交30年。

[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]

請(qǐng)根據(jù)這一事件在班會(huì)課上談?wù)勀銓?duì)“禮貌”的看法，包含以下內(nèi)容：

1. 你對(duì)“禮貌”的理解；

2. 中國(guó)人喜歡熱鬧，但干擾他人是不好的；

3. 人們應(yīng)了解外國(guó)文化，照顧他人感受。

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Politeness is very important for everyone.

（佛山市順德區(qū)勒流中學(xué)易桂清）

（9）

近年來(lái)，有一些學(xué)生沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲不能自拔。全國(guó)人大代表錢(qián)麗萍正在向社會(huì)廣泛征求意見(jiàn)，準(zhǔn)備向“人大”提交一份關(guān)于防止未成年人沉溺于網(wǎng)路游戲的議案。

[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]

你作為一名高中生，請(qǐng)就以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，向錢(qián)麗萍代表闡述自己的看法：

1. 應(yīng)通過(guò)教育，使學(xué)生認(rèn)識(shí)到網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲?qū)η嗌倌甑奈：Γ?/p>

2. 網(wǎng)吧應(yīng)當(dāng)誠(chéng)信營(yíng)業(yè)，禁止未成年人上網(wǎng)；

3. 通過(guò)立法，禁止網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲制造商發(fā)行有害未成年人的游戲，如暴力游戲等；

4. 學(xué)生應(yīng)自覺(jué)抵制網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的誘惑，把時(shí)間放在學(xué)習(xí)上。

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Dear Madam:

I write a letter to tell you my opinions on how to prevent students from addiction.

（陽(yáng)江市陽(yáng)西縣第一中學(xué)羅厚?。?/p>

（10）

[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]

假定你是李華，2009春節(jié)前你的美國(guó)筆友Tom向你了解大陸贈(zèng)臺(tái)大熊貓的情況，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)封回信：

1. 大熊貓的基本情況：

名字：團(tuán)團(tuán)、圓圓

年齡：四歲

出生地：四川

現(xiàn)居地：臺(tái)北動(dòng)物園

2. 2008年12月23日飛抵臺(tái)灣，受到熱情歡迎，汽車(chē)站和機(jī)場(chǎng)入口掛滿熊貓卡通圖片。

3. 在臺(tái)北動(dòng)物園照顧周到，健康快樂(lè)。

4. 報(bào)道將于2009年春節(jié)與臺(tái)灣公眾見(jiàn)面，屆時(shí)每天將有成千上萬(wàn)的觀眾前往。

5. 意義。

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Dear Tom,

Thank you for your concern about the pandas gifted by the mainland to Taiwan.

…

Yours truly,

Li Hua

（茂名市茂港區(qū)第一中學(xué)楊開(kāi)云）

參考范文

（11）

你和一些英國(guó)朋友在北京游玩，本周六準(zhǔn)備參觀長(zhǎng)城。導(dǎo)游告知了你當(dāng)天的安排，下面是你和導(dǎo)游交談時(shí)記錄的內(nèi)容：

1. 早上8∶00出發(fā)，乘車(chē)前往；

2. 大約兩個(gè)小時(shí)后到達(dá)八達(dá)嶺停車(chē)場(chǎng)；

3. 自由參觀長(zhǎng)城，中餐自理；

4. 服務(wù)亭（service boot）有講解器（interpreter）租用，中英文均可；

5. 下午5∶30在停車(chē)場(chǎng)集合，乘車(chē)回酒店。

[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以上談話內(nèi)容，給他們的領(lǐng)隊(duì)John發(fā)e-mail通知有關(guān)安排。

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Dear John,

Im very glad to tell you about the visit to the Great Wall this Saturday.

…

Best wishes,

Tom

（東莞市高埗中學(xué)張寒平、楊杰鋒命題；尹佩鋒同學(xué)提供參考范文）

（12）

教育部辦公廳下發(fā)了《關(guān)于開(kāi)展京劇進(jìn)中小學(xué)課堂試點(diǎn)工作的通知》，決定2008年3月到2009年7月在廣東等10省市開(kāi)展試點(diǎn)工作，將京劇納入九年義務(wù)教育階段音樂(lè)課程之中。關(guān)于這項(xiàng)改革，社會(huì)上的爭(zhēng)議，褒貶不一。

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請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇“京劇進(jìn)中小學(xué)課堂”的短文：

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（湛江市遂溪縣第二中學(xué)朱偉民）

（1）

Great changes have taken place in our life since the reform and opening policy was carried out in our country. Taking transport means as an example, at the beginning of the reform and opening, people were proud of having a bicycle. But in the 1990s, motor cycles were popular among ordinary family. At present, with the improvement of our life, more and more people own cars, which brings great convenience to their lives. As a middle school student, what I should do now is to study hard to make a contribution to our country.

（2）

Barack Obama, the son of a black man from Kenya and a white American woman, born in Honolulu, Hawaii on August 4th, 1961, lives in Chicago. Married in 1992, he has two daughters. In 1983, he graduated from Columbia University and in 1988, he was admitted into Harvard Law School ,where he gained his doctors degree in 1991. After graduation, he worked as a lawyer, lecturer and then began his political career. On November 4, 2008, Barack Obama defeated John McCain in the general election and became the first African American President of the United States

（3）

To enrich the studentsschool life, our school held the annual art week in the first week of December. There were various activities including singing, dancing on the stage , a game of tug-of-war on the playground and so on.Besides, the students put waste paper to artistic use by coloring and crafting some things, such as flowers, cards, etc. The most attractive part of the art week was that some students made a map of China with leaves. Therefore, the students benefited a lot from these activities as some of them showed their hidden talents by singing, dancing, drawing , made friends and, above all, they freed themselves from endless homework and exams.

（4）

Dear Jack,

How nice to hear from you again. You want to know something about my physical training . Not having taken any exercise before last year, not only did I feel tired and lonely but I also had a poor appetite and couldnt sleep well, which seriously affected my study. But now both my health and study have been greatly improved because I do some running or play basketball every day. Besides, I can build up my confidence and make a lot of friends. In conclusion, taking exercise is beneficial to us both physically and mentally. As a famous saying goes, “Good health is the greatest wealth.”

Best wishes,

Li Hua

（5）

1500 Chinese took part in an survey about how happy they are and got an average score of 64.97. In the surve , college students and the retired are the happiest, scoring around 68, followed in ranking by people like the public servants, while the unemployed together with the layoffs got the lowest point of 61.03. To improve our happiness quotient, the experts advise it is essential to have some peace and quiet every day. Besides, the most positive thing we can do is to learn to be in good relationships with others. They also point out that sharing our wellbeings with others plays an important part, too. For me, though my life is not always perfect, I still keep smiling even at the moment when the unexpected happens.

（6）

An old man fished by the river and he was so skillful that soon his basket was full of fish. A lovely child came by and the old man would like to give all his fish to him, but the child rejected. Surprisedly, the man asked for the reason and the child said, “I would like to take your fish pole, because this basket of fish would soon be eaten up, but with the fish pole, I can catch fish myself whenever I want to eat fish all my life.” The little child thought that he could get fish just with the fishing tool, but actually it is the skill to fish that is the key to countless fish. So rather than simply take the tools, we should always learn the way to “fish” in our life.

（7）

Dear Mike,

Im very glad to have received your letter. Now let me tell you about the main events in China in 2008.

At the beginning of the year, a heavy snowstorm hit Hunnan, Guizhou and several other provinces, causing a severe economic loss. Whats worse, on May 12, the terrible Wenchuan earthquake took the life of thousands of millions of people, shocking the whole world. To our great joy, we offered the world an excellent and successful Olympic Game in August. On Sep 25, we succeeded in sending off Shenzhou VII, which greatly inspired the whole nation. Near the end of the year China couldnt escape from the world economy crisis, but our government and people are determined to overcome the difficulties and pursue a bright future.

Best wishes,

Mary

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Politeness is very important for everyone. Manners acceptable in one culture may be considered extremely intolerable in another. In my point of view, it is fine as long as we treat others with respect and sincerity and our behavior doesnt cause any inconvenience or disturbance. As we all know, the Chinese are more accustomed to being loud and having a lot of people around, especially at celebrations and get-togethers. However, it is also necessary to make people aware that they are being rude and disturbing by talking loudly in public places. Therefore, I do hope people will learn about cultures of other countries and mind their manners with consideration for othersfeelings.

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Dear Madam:

I write a letter to tell you my opinions on how to prevent students from addiction. Firstly, we should get students realize the harm of internet games by education. As we all know, playing computer games for a long time is very harmful for our health. Secondly, we should make netbars operate leally by checking them, forbidding the teenagers who are under age come into netbars. Thirdly, we should prohibit the makers of computer games to make harmful games foe young people by laws, such as violent games. In the end, as a student, studying is always the first thing, and we should consciously resist the temptations of internet games.

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Dear Tom,

Thank you for your concern about the pandas gifted by the mainland to Taiwan. The four-year-old pandas, named Tuan Tuan and Yuan Yuan, were flown to the island from their home in Sichuan on December 23rd, 2008. On arrival in Taiwan, they were warmly welcomed by the people of Taiwan, with cartoon images of the bears displaying at bus stations and the airport's entrance. Being taken good care of in the Taipei Zoo, they are living a healthy and happy life there. It is reported that the panda pair is scheduled to meet the Taiwan public during the Spring Festival of 2009, when tens and thousands of people will come to visit them every day. As the names Tuan Tuan and Yuan Yuan, which mean “reunion” in Chinese indicate, the arrival of the pandas will contribute to bringing the Chinese people across the Taiwan Straits together.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

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Dear John,

Im very glad to tell you about the visit to the Great Wall this Saturday.

We are to set off by coach at 8:00 on Saturday morning. In about 2 hours, we will arrive at Badaling Parking Area, where we will begin our visit. You can rent an interpreter, who can speak both Chinese and English, to help you enjoy your visit. Do remember to prepare your lunch by yourself. 5:30pm is the time for us to gather at the Parking Area and leave for the hotel.

Best wishes,

Tom

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The Ministry of Education launched a new reform: let Peking Opera step into classroom. Many people in favor of it agree that teaching Peking Opera at school could popularize traditional art. However, to some extent, setting a new course will add to students academic burden which has been already heavy enough. Therefore, Peking Opera which students may have more freedom to decide whether to take or not, should be set as an optional course not a compulsory one. In a word, promoting and developing traditional culture cannot merely depend on Peking Opera, but the key lies in improving the cultural awareness of the whole nation.

責(zé)任編校蔣小青