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Im Gina. I like go1 to a movie on weekends, and I also like basketball. My favorite is play2 piano3 for the reason that it is very graceful(優(yōu)美). Now Im in the piano club. There are many classmates there. We learn it from each other. Sometimes they teach I4. Sometimes I teach them. We learn it happily. Please soon join us5.

評(píng)語(yǔ):本篇通過(guò)介紹自己的愛(ài)好——彈鋼琴，號(hào)召其他同學(xué)都加入鋼琴俱樂(lè)部，文章條理清晰，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔。

1. like doing sth.表示習(xí)慣性的喜愛(ài)做某事，即go應(yīng)改為going。

2. be后接賓語(yǔ)play要用動(dòng)名詞也就是v-ing形式，即playing。

3. 若指打球，則play后直接加球類(lèi)名詞，為固定搭配,但是表示彈奏樂(lè)器，play后要加定冠詞the再加樂(lè)器名。例如：play the guitar。

4. teach是實(shí)義動(dòng)詞，在句中作謂語(yǔ)成份，其后接賓語(yǔ)，人稱(chēng)代詞要用其相應(yīng)的賓格形式，即me。

5. “趕快加入吧”, join us soon, soon 不久的將來(lái)，在此作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，位于句尾。

My Hobby

Im Gina. I like going to a movie on weekends and I also like basketball. My favorite is playing the piano for the reason that its very graceful. Now Im in the piano club. There are many classmates there. We learn it from each other. Sometimes they teach me. Sometimes I teach them. We learn it happily. Please join us soon.

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