【寫作任務】
家鄉(xiāng)的風景如畫,人情味濃,讓我們感受到了無盡的溫暖和關(guān)愛。家鄉(xiāng)的美食、風俗、文化,讓我們深深愛著這片土地。家鄉(xiāng)是每個人心底的根,是每個人心中最特別的地方。你的學校正在開展主題為“My Hometown, My Love”的演講活動,請用英文寫一篇演講稿。
內(nèi)容包括:
1.介紹我的家鄉(xiāng),如美景、美食、風俗、人文、家鄉(xiāng)的變化等;
2.歡迎游覽我的家鄉(xiāng)及游覽注意事項,如最佳游覽時間、交通方式等。
注意:
1.詞數(shù):100 左右;
2.可進行適當發(fā)揮;
3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。
【試題分析】
本文是一篇材料性命題式書面表達試題,寫作體裁是一篇應用文類的演講稿。試題要求我們根據(jù)提示信息要點,圍繞著“My Hometown, My Love”這個主題來撰寫一篇發(fā)言稿,介紹你的家鄉(xiāng),宣傳你的家鄉(xiāng), 讓更多的人了解你的家鄉(xiāng)。
【寫作思路】
本文話題屬于“周圍環(huán)境”,話題主題是“人與社會”,由此可知所寫內(nèi)容屬于中學生日常學習生活范疇,大家會有很多反映家鄉(xiāng)風貌的內(nèi)容要寫。依據(jù)本文特點,我們可以采取如下三步法來撰寫本文:
第一步,總體介紹家鄉(xiāng)是在什么地方;
第二步,詳細介紹家鄉(xiāng)是個怎么樣的地方,如景點、美食、風俗、氣候和發(fā)展情況等;
第三步,總結(jié)并表達對家鄉(xiāng)的熱愛,歡迎讀者來家鄉(xiāng)做客。
注意:
1.本文是一篇發(fā)言稿,語句表達以一般現(xiàn)在時為主,人稱用第一人稱。
2.寫作要點已給出,應注意不要遺漏題干給出的要點,適當增加細節(jié),靈活運用恰當?shù)木湫?,使行文流暢自然?/p>
【范文欣賞】
My Hometown, My Love
①Dear everyone, would you please be kind enough to vote for my home town?
My home, Xinbin County is located in the east of Liaoning Province. It is the birthplace of Qing Dynasty.
My hometown has a population of about 0.3 million. The people here are very friendly.②The house we live in now is big and clean. Our living conditions have also been greatly improved. You can learn more about Manchu culture and history here. There are a lot of places of interest here, such as the first capital of Qing Dynasty,Yongling Tomb of Qing Dynasty, Liaoning roof ridge and so on.
Every year, lots of visitors come here in spring. They enjoy themselves a lot in my home town. Also, you can taste much delicious food, such as eight plates and eight bowls, one of the most famous Manchu dishes.
③May is the best time to visit my hometown.④The weather is neither too hot nor too cold. Our transportation here is very convenient. There are buses and taxis. You can’t throw rubbish anywhere when you come here. And if someone helps you, say thank you. If you have a chance to visit my home town, I’m sure you’ll have a good time.
Welcome to my hometown!
【亮點分析】
①作者運用了一般疑問句開啟了本文話題,句式表達簡潔明了。 “adj. +enough to do sth.”的運用豐富了文章的句式結(jié)構(gòu),增強了文章的可讀性。
②定語從句“The house we live in...”的運用表明了作者具有扎實的語言功底和語言運用能力。
③動詞不定式短語“to visit my hometown”作后置定語,吸引讀者眼球,凸顯了作者的語言表達能力。
④短語“neither...nor...”的運用是本文的一道亮麗風景線,提高了文章的檔次。
【名師點評】
本文要點齊全、層次分明、語言通順并表達地道。作者能夠抓住寫作要求和主題內(nèi)容圍繞著“家鄉(xiāng)優(yōu)點”來拓展全文。作者依次介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的地點、家鄉(xiāng)的面貌及其發(fā)展狀況,也表達出對家鄉(xiāng)的情感。文中使用enough, located, friendly, improve, have a population of, places of interest, enjoy oneself, such as, neither...nor..., welcome to等高級詞語,同時還運用了狀語從句、賓語從句、定語從句等高級句式,使文章亮點紛呈不斷,為讀者留下了美好的印象。
【拓展練習】
隨著中國的國際地位日益提高,越來越多的外國友人想要了解中國,為此,China Daily報社正在以“My country”為題向中學生征稿。假如你是李輝,請根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇短文投稿。
要點:
1.地域廣闊;
2. 歷史悠久;
3. 景點眾多;
4. ……
要求:
1. 語句通順,符合邏輯,可適當發(fā)揮;
2. 文中不可出現(xiàn)真實姓名與學校名稱;
3. 詞數(shù) 80~100(已給出的不計)。
My country
China is a beautiful and great country.
One possible version:
My country
China is a beautiful and great country. It’s a big country with a very long and colourful history. It has a vast territory with many high mountains and long rivers. There are many places of interest in China, for example, the Great Wall which draws the attention of people from all over the world. We can visit some ancient capital cities to know about its history and culture. There are different races. Each race has its own culture and customs. My country is becoming stronger and stronger. When foreigners come to my country, they fall in love with the food. I am so proud that I am part of this country.