如何寫(xiě)好建議信

山東 李全忠

?情境呈現(xiàn)

假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Lily最近因肥胖問(wèn)題而感到煩惱，發(fā)來(lái)郵件向你咨詢(xún)?nèi)绾尾拍芸刂企w重并保持健康。請(qǐng)你給她回一封郵件，提出相關(guān)建議。注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Lily,

Yours,

Li Hua

【佳作賞析】

Dear Lily,

I'm sorry to hear that you're depressed because of your weight.Here are my tips for you.

Above all,I suggest you do more sports,such as running,swimming,playing basketball and so on.Besides,drinking enough water is also a good way to help you lose weight.Finally,if I were you,I would keep a healthy diet.Not only should you eat on time,but also you should eat less meat and more vegetables.

Best wishes to you!I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

?寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)

一、文體概述

建議信是向別人提出合理的建議，讓對(duì)方接受自己的想法、主張并解決相關(guān)問(wèn)題的信件。寫(xiě)建議信時(shí)，要注意觀點(diǎn)合理，禮貌當(dāng)先。同時(shí)，建議信要簡(jiǎn)潔明確、理由充分，具備合理性和說(shuō)服力。建議信主要包括：

1.說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信目的；

2.提出建議與改進(jìn)措施；

3.希望對(duì)方采納建議并表達(dá)自己的祝愿。

二、謀篇布局

三、常用語(yǔ)塊

ought to 應(yīng)該

give/offer sb some advice 給某人一些建議

as follows 如下

have difficulty/trouble（in）doing sth 做 某事有困難

make use of 利用

ask sb for advice 向某人征求意見(jiàn)

make a plan 制訂計(jì)劃

find...helpful/useful 認(rèn)為……有用

take...into account/consideration 把……考慮在內(nèi)

get improved 得到改善

change for the better 有所改善

in my opinion/from my point of view 在我看來(lái)

carry out your plan step by step 一步步實(shí)施你的計(jì)劃

have/hold a positive attitude towards/to對(duì)……持有積極的態(tài)度

go out for a walk 去散步

be beneficial to 對(duì)……有益

communicate with 與……溝通

四、常用句式

●Paragraph 1 闡明寫(xiě)信目的

1.I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my suggestions about how to develop good learning habits.很高興收到你的來(lái)信，信中你詢(xún)問(wèn)我關(guān)于如何養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣的建議。

2.Concerning your request,I would like to offer my advice on how to keep fit.對(duì)于你的請(qǐng)求，我想就如何保持健康提出我的建議。

3.My suggestions are as follows.以下是我的建議。

●Paragraph 2 提出建議

1.It is necessary for you to have a healthy diet.擁有健康的飲食對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)很有必要。

2.The best way to improve your Chinese is to read many easy Chinese books.提升你的中文的最佳途徑就是去閱讀許多淺顯易懂的中文書(shū)籍。

3.There are many beautiful and colorful pictures,which can help us understand Chinese better.有許多好看的、色彩多樣的圖片可以幫助我們更好地理解中文。

4.These books have many advantages.One of them is that we can find a variety of topics from the books,such as science,culture and history.這些書(shū)有許多優(yōu)點(diǎn)，其中之一就是我們可以從中找到各種各樣的話(huà)題，比如科學(xué)、文化和歷史。

5.You'd better take part in after class activities as much as possible,which will not only make your school life colorful,but also improve your learning.你最好盡可能多地參加課外活動(dòng)，這不但會(huì)使你的校園生活變得豐富多彩，還能提升你的學(xué)習(xí)水平。

6.If I were you,I would try learning and singing Chinese songs.如果我是你，我會(huì)嘗試學(xué)習(xí)唱中文歌曲。

7.Eating less meat and more vegetables is also a good idea.少吃肉、多吃蔬菜也是一個(gè)不錯(cuò)的主意。

8.Drinking enough water is also a good way to help you lose weight.喝足夠的水也是一個(gè)幫助你減肥的好辦法。

●Paragraph 3 表達(dá)祝愿

1.I hope you'll find these suggestions/proposals/recommendations useful.我希望你會(huì)覺(jué)得這些建議有用。

2.I hope that my suggestions will be of some value.我希望我的建議將會(huì)有價(jià)值。

3.I do hope to hear good news from you.我希望能聽(tīng)到你的好消息。

五、常用銜接詞

firstly

first of all

above all

to begin with

in the first place

for one thing

secondly

besides

moreover

in addition

what's more

furthermore

worse still

to make matters worse

for another thing

finally

at last

in the end

last but not least

?即時(shí)強(qiáng)訓(xùn)

Task 1

假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來(lái)信向你咨詢(xún)?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文，請(qǐng)給他回一封郵件，給出你的建議。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Peter,

Yours,

Li Hua

Task 2

假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Mike 最近感覺(jué)學(xué)習(xí)壓力很大，寫(xiě)信向你求助。請(qǐng)你用英文給他回一封信，就如何處理壓力給他一些建議。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Mike,

Yours,

Li Hua