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英語(yǔ)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)提到,英語(yǔ)教學(xué)應(yīng)注重語(yǔ)言的感悟,積累和運(yùn)用?,F(xiàn)在,多數(shù)學(xué)生寫作結(jié)構(gòu)混亂,語(yǔ)句不完整或意思不明,條理不清晰,或者缺乏技巧,句式單一,缺乏連貫性,導(dǎo)致學(xué)生害怕寫作。為消除此障礙,可在廣泛誦讀基礎(chǔ)上,通過(guò)模仿,遷移,積累詞匯,句型,段落框架,語(yǔ)段,并在潛移默化中掌握經(jīng)典文章的寫作技巧。
近來(lái),筆者就如何在寫作教學(xué)過(guò)程中加強(qiáng)誦讀意識(shí)做了一些嘗試并頗有感觸。
諺語(yǔ)誦讀作為句子誦讀的典型,可提高寫作質(zhì)量,另外,多數(shù)諺語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)對(duì)稱,學(xué)生可在誦讀基礎(chǔ)上仿寫諺語(yǔ),這是讀到寫的更高層次。
A good friend is like a mirror./Friends are like books-you don't need a lot of them as long as they are good.教師可拓展諺語(yǔ),便于寫作輸出。如:A life without a friend is a life without a sun./A friend in need is a friend indeed.
在誦讀基礎(chǔ)上,可二次創(chuàng)造。如:仿寫前:Friends are like books-you don't need a lot of them as long as they are good。仿寫后:Friends are like a tree hole-you don't need a lot of them as long as they can share your problems./Friends are like a lighthouse-you don't need a lot of them as long as they can guide the directions.
學(xué)生仿寫諺語(yǔ),是對(duì)諺語(yǔ)鞏固與拓展,提升語(yǔ)言質(zhì)量。
段落寫作是初中英語(yǔ)寫作關(guān)鍵。指導(dǎo)學(xué)生運(yùn)用典型片段進(jìn)行模仿遷移,關(guān)注段落結(jié)構(gòu)以及動(dòng)詞形容詞副詞的使用,在誦讀的基礎(chǔ)上沉淀語(yǔ)言服務(wù)寫作。
1.段落結(jié)構(gòu)誦讀 段落結(jié)構(gòu)誦讀可幫助學(xué)生樹立框架意識(shí),引導(dǎo)學(xué)生關(guān)注表達(dá)方式,為寫作搭建支架。
如,以新目標(biāo)八上第一單元為例,結(jié)構(gòu)是總(What a difference a day makes?。┓郑˙efore getting to the top/When getting to the top)。學(xué)生也可進(jìn)行遷移或者二次創(chuàng)造。以下是某生習(xí)作片段:When I was on the halfway to the top,I felt like there was a weight on my legs.But I did my best.As soon as I reach the top,I could feel the great power.When,as soon as是在課本we wanted to walk up to the top及when we got to the top上再創(chuàng)造。因此,應(yīng)關(guān)注并誦讀不同體裁結(jié)構(gòu)的表達(dá)方式。
2.動(dòng)詞形容詞副詞誦讀 動(dòng)詞形容詞和副詞的恰當(dāng)使用可展示人處現(xiàn)場(chǎng)即視感,在誦讀中注意積累。
如,新目標(biāo)八上第十單元閱讀文章中描述Laura丟失錢包后忐忑與告知父母真相后的釋然,形成反差,如Laura的忐忑:worried,afraid,even walked,kept thinking,父母的善解人意:understanding,careless,got,more careful。
課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)提到要從“過(guò)程和方法”維度出發(fā)。詩(shī)歌誦讀作為語(yǔ)段誦讀的典范,在反復(fù)實(shí)踐中嘗試不同的誦讀方法。以新目標(biāo)九上第七單元Mom knows best為例,教師在指導(dǎo)時(shí)有力度。從初讀標(biāo)題到文本解讀后復(fù)讀標(biāo)題,不刻意分析如何讀,而是在教學(xué)過(guò)程中渾然不覺(jué)地進(jìn)行。另外,教師在挖掘時(shí)有深度。談?wù)搶W(xué)生個(gè)人經(jīng)歷內(nèi)化語(yǔ)言,感同身受,加深對(duì)文章理解。慢慢地,學(xué)生明白讀的要求,關(guān)注停頓、輕重、緩急、抑揚(yáng)、感情和心理之間的微妙關(guān)系。音讀詩(shī)歌,開啟理解詩(shī)歌的大門。意讀詩(shī)歌,探尋詩(shī)歌的意蘊(yùn)。美讀詩(shī)歌,體驗(yàn)詩(shī)歌的情感。在教學(xué)中,應(yīng)讓學(xué)生參與到詩(shī)歌鑒賞中,通過(guò)音讀,意讀和美讀,體會(huì)詩(shī)歌的情感。
歌德說(shuō),讀一本好書,就是和許多高尚的人談話。誦讀英文經(jīng)典,是英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的課外拓展和延伸,賦予我們思想與底蘊(yùn)。教師可將新目標(biāo)課本與名著閱讀結(jié)合。如新目標(biāo)八上第六單元寫作講述的是花木蘭替父從軍的故事,教師可穿插《花木蘭》經(jīng)典對(duì)白并在課后進(jìn)行誦讀。如:You're the craziest man I've ever met.以下是某生影評(píng)寫作:Monkey King is the cleverest character I've ever read./The emperor is the most foolish emperor the play has ever showed.
初中英語(yǔ)寫作教學(xué)是點(diǎn)滴積累的過(guò)程,句段篇有待于積累,而積累的方法之一是誦讀。初中英語(yǔ)誦讀,雖然讀得慢,但吸收知識(shí)和增長(zhǎng)內(nèi)力的效率較高,似慢實(shí)快。從“讀”學(xué)寫,以寫促“讀”,讀寫結(jié)合似乎已經(jīng)成為定論,它對(duì)提高英語(yǔ)讀寫能力提高學(xué)生英語(yǔ)素養(yǎng)可見(jiàn)一斑。