My Dream

My Dream

___I had a dream last night. It was a funny dream!

___In my dream, Sun Wukong was flying in the sky. I said to him: “Sun

Wukong! I want to fly too!” Sun Wukong said: “O.K. I will help you!” He blew（吹）

one breath（氣）and I began to rise（升起）slowly（慢慢地）. Then I was flying into

the sky. I was very happy and excited. I shouted（喊）, “Ah! I flew in the blue

sky! Thank you! Sun Wukong.” He said to me: “You’re welcome! As long as

you are happy, I’ll be happy, too! I have an incantation（咒語(yǔ)）which can let you fly.” Later I learned the incantation so that I could fly with Sun Wukong. We two flew in the sky very freely（自由地）. Suddenly, he asked me: “Do you want to ride a dragon（龍）?” I replied（回答）immediately（馬上）, “Yes, I do. That must be very fun!” So Sun Wukong beckoned（召喚）a dragon. Then we rode on the dragon and flew everywhere freely in the sky. I saw mountains and seas. They’re very beautiful!

But all of a sudden, I fell off the dragon. I woke up. It was my mum who woke me up. How disappointed（失望的）!

I made up my mind—I will fly into the blue sky as a spaceman in the future. Wait for me, Sun Wukong!

劉彥喆

甘肅省蘭州市西固區(qū)蘭煉一小 六年級(jí)

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