巧設(shè)故事整合語(yǔ)言，話題寫(xiě)作鞏固單元知識(shí)點(diǎn)

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【摘要】高中英語(yǔ)單元知識(shí)點(diǎn)的復(fù)習(xí)教學(xué)普遍存在機(jī)械化模式，本文通過(guò)巧設(shè)情境，將零散的單元核心知識(shí)點(diǎn)整合成一個(gè)感人的主題故事，讓學(xué)生進(jìn)行話題寫(xiě)作，并參考范文學(xué)習(xí)亮點(diǎn)表達(dá)，讓學(xué)生背誦默寫(xiě)該篇，旨在有效復(fù)習(xí)單元核心知識(shí)點(diǎn)的同時(shí)促進(jìn)學(xué)生英語(yǔ)綜合語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力的提高。

【關(guān)鍵詞】主題故事 單元核心知識(shí)點(diǎn) 話題寫(xiě)作

【中圖分類(lèi)號(hào)】G633.41 【文獻(xiàn)標(biāo)識(shí)碼】A 【文章編號(hào)】2095-3089（2017）22-0114-01

一、目的

不少教師在單元知識(shí)點(diǎn)復(fù)習(xí)中只用聽(tīng)寫(xiě)、默寫(xiě)和做練習(xí)題的機(jī)械方法，筆者通過(guò)巧設(shè)情境，將零散的單元核心知識(shí)點(diǎn)整合成一個(gè)感人的故事，讓學(xué)生進(jìn)行話題寫(xiě)作，幫助學(xué)生鞏固單元核心知識(shí)點(diǎn)。

二、巧設(shè)故事整合語(yǔ)言，話題寫(xiě)作鞏固單元知識(shí)點(diǎn)

在完成北師大版Module1 Uni1單元教學(xué)后，因Lesson3 A Volunteer Teacher是一個(gè)有意義的話題，所以選影片“美麗的大腳”中的夏雨為寫(xiě)作對(duì)象，要求盡可能用Unit 1核心知識(shí)點(diǎn)寫(xiě)作。具體如下：

1.寫(xiě)前準(zhǔn)備：

（1）周末讓學(xué)生在家看這部影片

（2）給出語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)鋪墊，讓學(xué)生默寫(xiě)可能用到的表達(dá)

①幾年前大學(xué)畢業(yè)，在北京工作；打牌、遛狗、上網(wǎng)占據(jù)了大部分空余時(shí)間；厭倦，去當(dāng)志愿者

②那里生活充滿挑戰(zhàn)；水少，很少洗臉；打水要排一整天隊(duì)；水苦無(wú)法忍受

③孩子們喜歡她；也抱怨艱苦生活，遭受痛苦，包括失去孩子，被張美麗對(duì)孩子們的愛(ài)感動(dòng)

④一年后要離開(kāi)；知道有一天能看看長(zhǎng)城是孩子們的夢(mèng)想，邀請(qǐng)張老師和孩子們?nèi)ケ本?，使他們的?mèng)想成真

⑤希望更多志愿者去教貧困地區(qū)的孩子；覺(jué)得在日常生活中節(jié)約用水是職責(zé)

（3）根據(jù)提示完成寫(xiě)作，介紹夏雨老師，首段已給出

Xia Yu is one of the main characters in the film Pretty Big Feet. She is a beautiful young teacher.

2.堂上寫(xiě)作階段

學(xué)生遇困難教師及時(shí)指導(dǎo)

3.展示范文，讓學(xué)生參照改正完善

After graduating from university several years ago， she worked in Beijing. Playing cards，walking the dog and going online took up most of her spare time.Because she got bored with such a relaxing life， she left Beijing for a remote village in western China working as a volunteer teacher.

Her life there was filled with challenges.There was so little water that people there seldom washed faces.Normally it took a whole day to queue up to get a bucket of water from the only well in the village.The drinking water was so bitter that she couldnt stand it.

She taught the kids a lot，so all of them were fond of her.Though she also complained about the hard life and suffered from pains，including losing her baby，she chose to stay with the kids longer because she was deeply moved by Zhang Meilis love to the kids.

A year later，she must leave.She knew it was the kids dream to see Beijing one day，so she invited Ms Zhang and the kids to Beijing to have a look.She made their dream come true.

I hope more volunteer teachers will go to teach the kids in poor areas.Besides，I feel it our duty to save water in our everyday life.

三、讓學(xué)生背誦默寫(xiě)范文，進(jìn)一步鞏固

四、結(jié)語(yǔ)

該話題寫(xiě)作巧妙把本單元核心知識(shí)點(diǎn)融入文中，活躍了學(xué)生思維，教育意義深刻；背誦范文再次提高了核心知識(shí)點(diǎn)的復(fù)現(xiàn)率和使用率，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生恰到好處地使用亮點(diǎn)表達(dá)，有利于學(xué)生英語(yǔ)綜合運(yùn)用能力的提高。