高考英語書面有達(dá)中咨詢信的寫法

雷康成

咨詢信也屬于應(yīng)用文的一種，正文通常包括以下三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：（1）闡明寫信目的； （2）咨詢?cè)斍?；?）表達(dá)謝意，期盼回復(fù)。分析多年高考英語作文真題發(fā)現(xiàn)，2005年與2014年高考全國(guó)卷真題中以咨詢信的完整體形式命題，其他省市的高考真題則把咨詢這一內(nèi)容作為寫作其中的一個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行考查。

一、常用套語

1. 寫信目的

（1）I am writing to ask for information about how to be a volunteer for the Asian Winter Games. 我寫信來是為了咨詢?nèi)绾纬蔀閬喼薅具\(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)志愿者。

（2）I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding /concerning /on how to learn Chinese well. 我寫信來是為了想知道您是否可以給我提供一些關(guān)于如何才能學(xué)好中文的信息。

（3）I am writing to you for further information about the English training. 我寫信來是為了進(jìn)一步了解英語培訓(xùn)。

（4）Im writing for more information about how to better learning habits. 我寫信來是為了進(jìn)一步獲取有關(guān)改善學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣的信息。

（5）I am writing in response to your advertisement. 我寫這封信是為了回復(fù)、回應(yīng)你們的廣告。

2. 咨詢?cè)斍?/p>

（1）Could you please tell me something about how to be a volunteer for the Asian Winter Games？您能向我介紹一下如何成為亞洲冬季運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)志愿者嗎？

（2）I would greatly appreciate it if you could tell me something about the rebuilt Qianmen Street in Beijing. 如果您能告訴我有關(guān)改建后北京前門大街的情況，我將感激不盡。

（3）I wonder if /whether you could tell me something about English speech contest to be held in our school on June 1st. 我想要知道您是否可以告訴我一些有關(guān)我們學(xué)校將在6月1日舉行的英語演講比賽的情況。

（4）I would like to know if /whether you could tell me something about summer courses. 我想要知道您是否可以告訴我暑期課程的情況？

（5）I would be much obliged to you if you let me know something about the summer camp. 如果你能告訴我有關(guān)夏令營(yíng)的情況， 我將不勝感激。

（6）Could you （be so kind as to）tell me something about studentsvisiting group. 您是否可以告訴我有關(guān)學(xué)生訪問團(tuán)的情況。

（7）I would （also）like to inquire something about a spokesman for animals. 我（也）想咨詢動(dòng)物代言人的情況事宜。

（8）I would be grateful if its so kind of you to give me some essential information. 如果您能告知一些必要的信息，我將不勝感激。

（9）Id like to know something more about the volunteer activity. 我想要了解志愿者活動(dòng)。

3. 表達(dá)謝意，期盼回復(fù)

如果您能回復(fù)，我將感激不盡。

（1）I would be grateful to receive a prompt reply.

（2）Id appreciate it very much if you could give me a reply.

（3）I am looking forward to your early reply.

（4）I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.

二、高考題

1.（2015北京）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)給你的美國(guó)朋友Jim寫一封郵件，告訴他你打算參加龍舟訓(xùn)練營(yíng)，希望他一起參加。郵件的內(nèi)容包括：詢問對(duì)方的意向。[第三個(gè)要點(diǎn)]

參考范文：I wonder if/whether you are interested in joining the Dragon Boat Training Camp. I will offer you more information about it if you prefer to join it.

2.（2015天津）假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李津，你校擬向美國(guó)友好交流學(xué)校的中文班捐贈(zèng)一批圖書。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一封郵件與中文班班長(zhǎng)Chris聯(lián)系，并告知將于今年七月赴對(duì)方學(xué)校參加夏令營(yíng)時(shí)帶去贈(zèng)書。[第三個(gè)要點(diǎn)] 詢問對(duì)方的其他需求。

參考范文：I wonder if/whether you should need any other things. Please do not hesitate to tell us.

3.（2013 全國(guó)大綱卷、新課標(biāo) I ）假定你是李華。請(qǐng)你給筆友Peter寫封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會(huì)，帶去他想要的那幅中國(guó)畫，同時(shí)詢問他是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需說明：李明：高個(gè)子，戴眼鏡航班號(hào)：CA985 到達(dá)：8月6日上午11：30

參考范文：I would be grateful if its so kind of you to meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the US？

4.（2014 全國(guó)卷 I）假定你是李華，計(jì)劃暑假間去英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)英語，為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意，請(qǐng)給該校寫封信，詢問有關(guān)情況（箭頭所指內(nèi)容）

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3. 參考詞匯：住宿-accommodation

參考范文：

Dear Sir/Madam，

I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. Ive seen your ad， and Id like to know something more about your six -week English course. First， could you tell me when the course will start and how many class hours there are every week Besides， I wish there would not to be too many students in a class. Moreover， I wonder how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Furthermore， I tend to know if there will be a host family or a university dormitory. Im looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

5.（ 2005全國(guó)卷 I） 假定你是李華，正在英國(guó)牛津參加短期語言培訓(xùn)，計(jì)劃星期天去倫敦旅游?；ヂ?lián)網(wǎng)上一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確（箭頭所指內(nèi)容）。請(qǐng)給該旅行社發(fā)一封電子郵件，詢問有關(guān)情況。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右，信的格式已為你寫好。

2. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3. 參考詞匯：牛津——Oxford 費(fèi)用——fee

參考范文：

Dear Sir/Madame，

Im writing for more information about the day tour to London. As a student at Oxford University， Id like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge， could you tell me whether it covers the entrance fees for visiting the places listed and whether the lunch is included？Besides， I wonder if I need to bring along my own food and how long the tour will last. Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day， I would like to inquire the time to return. Moreover， I tend to know if there is any time for shopping. I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

三、省市模擬題

1.（2016佛山一模）假定你是高三學(xué)生李華，打算申請(qǐng)就讀英國(guó)某所大學(xué)。請(qǐng)給該校寫一封信，了解申請(qǐng)入學(xué)事宜，書信的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

[第三個(gè)要點(diǎn)]詢問入讀該校的條件（考試、社會(huì)實(shí)踐等）；

參考范文：I would greatly appreciate it if you could tell me what exams I need to take to apply to your university. Besides， I wonder if you have any specific requirement for social practice.

2.（2016深圳一模）假定你是李華，你計(jì)劃去英國(guó)蘭卡斯特大學(xué)參加為期六個(gè)月的語言培訓(xùn)。你想寄宿在學(xué)校附近的英國(guó)人家里。該大學(xué)網(wǎng)站上的一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確（箭頭指內(nèi)容）。請(qǐng)給該校發(fā)一封電子郵件，詢問有關(guān)情況。

參考范文：

Dear Sir/Madam，

I am a student from China and plan to learn English in Lancaster University for 6 months. I am writing in response to your advertisement. Here are few things Id like to clarify.

Firstly， could you tell me how I can get to the University from my host home Secondly， Id like to know if I would have a separate room of my own. And I wonder if there are any children in the family. I would be beneficial to have someone of a similar age living with me. Also I tend to know if they have any special customs. Lastly， I wonder what is included within the fees in the ad， and whether it should be paid monthly or weekly.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

四、原創(chuàng)練習(xí)

假定你是李華，正在英國(guó)倫敦參加短期語言培訓(xùn)，計(jì)劃課余時(shí)間去兼職?；ヂ?lián)網(wǎng)上一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確（箭頭所指內(nèi)容）。請(qǐng)給該公司發(fā)一封電子郵件，詢問有關(guān)情況。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右，信的格式已為你寫好。

2. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir/Madame，

I am a student ...

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

參考范文

Dear Sir/Madame，

I am a student who is participating in the language training in London for a short time and plan to find a part-time job. Ive seen your ad， and Im writing for more information about detailed information for the job in your company. Firstly， could you tell me how I can get to your company？ As for the salary， I wonder whether I am given it monthly or weekly. Besides， I would like to inquire the types of jobs. Also I would greatly appreciate it if you could tell me when I should go to work. Moreover， Id like to know if I have some time to rest during work.

I would be grateful to receive a prompt reply.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

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