高中英語表格作文寫作初探

看表格、寫作文是書面表達(dá)形式之一。這類作文的特點(diǎn)是，命題者在表格內(nèi)列出若干個(gè)項(xiàng)目，各個(gè)項(xiàng)目的要點(diǎn)都用簡(jiǎn)短的語言說明，要求考生根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)寫一篇語句通順連貫的短文。從協(xié)作內(nèi)容上講，這種形式可適用于不同的文體，如記敘文、應(yīng)用文、說明文等。

考生要寫好此類作文，必須先審清題意，把握準(zhǔn)文章的體裁、格式，然后確立內(nèi)容重點(diǎn)，列出所有要點(diǎn)、涉及的相關(guān)詞語及句型，最后組織、排列句子，組段，成篇。

例題：假如你在自己的班級(jí)就校服問題進(jìn)行了調(diào)查（survey），下面是調(diào)查結(jié)果的統(tǒng)計(jì)表，請(qǐng)參照該表寫一篇題目為Report on the Survey about Our School Uniform的報(bào)告。

注意：

1.報(bào)告須包括調(diào)查表中的主要內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫。

2.詞數(shù)120詞左右。

參考詞匯：follow fashion 趕時(shí)髦

說明：此題屬表格作文，題材貼近考生生活實(shí)際，考生應(yīng)有話可說。

第一步，審題：此題要求寫一篇說明文。

第二步，編寫提綱。

1.有60%的人喜歡校服，原因是它看上去樣式新，顏色很好。穿著校服時(shí)顯得整潔，能表明衣著者是學(xué)生。衣服沒有好壞之別，人人都是平等的，沒必要趕時(shí)髦。

2.有30%的人不喜歡校服，原因是它樣式單調(diào)，不好看，顏色也不好，穿著不舒服。

3. 有10%的人對(duì)穿著校服未置可否。

第三步，列出陳述要點(diǎn)的重點(diǎn)詞語。

1. did a survey， school uniform， asked， what they thought about；

2. majority， 60% of them， fashionable， nice color， neat and tidy， a symbol of student， in one’s opinion， feel equal， no need， follow fashion；

3. feel uncomfortable， dull， old-fashioned， simple style；

4. have no idea.

第四步，將要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)展成句子。

1. I did a survey about our school uniform. I asked my classmates what they thought about our uniforms.

2. The majority like it. 60% of them say it is fashionable. The color is nice.They think it is neat and tidy and a symbol of student.In some students’ opinion，when we wear our school uniforms，we feel equal. There is no need to follow fashion.

3. 30% of my classmates don’t like the school uniforms. They say they feel it uncomfortable to wear school uniforms. The color is dull. It is old-fashioned. In the eyes of these students， its style is too simple.

4. The rest of them have no ideas about it. They feel it hard to decide whether they like it or not.

第五步，運(yùn)用合適的關(guān)聯(lián)詞、過度語連句成文。然后通讀全文，修改和補(bǔ)充。

參考范文：

I did a survey about our school uniform. I asked my classmates what they thought about our school uniform.

The majority like it. 60% of them say it is very fashionable and the color is nice. They think it is neat and tidy and a symbol of student. In some students’ opinion， when we wear our school uniforms， we feel equal and there is no need to follow fashion.

But there are 30% of them who don’t like the school uniform. They say they feel it uncomfortable to wear the uniforms.Not only is the color too dull but also it is too old-fashioned.In the eyes of these students， its style is very simple.

And the rest of them （ about 10%） expressed their feelings by saying they had no ideas about it.They felt it hard to decide whether they like it or dislike it.

練習(xí)：

題目一：下面是你市近幾年來人們飲食變化的調(diào)查表，現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這個(gè)調(diào)查表寫一個(gè)報(bào)告，并分析說明其中變化的原因。

注意：

1.盡可能少用表格中的數(shù)據(jù)。

2.詞數(shù)100左右。

參考詞匯：飲食：diet

題目二：假定你班最近要舉行一次關(guān)于上因特網(wǎng)的利弊辯論賽。你是贊成派之一，現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)根據(jù)你們贊成派所擬的要點(diǎn)寫一篇辯論稿。

注意：

1.文稿必須包括表格內(nèi)所有信息，行文連貫通順。

2.詞數(shù)120詞左右。

參考答案：

題目一：

Changes in People’s Diet

Diet is very importanoKkYS89JKEtbBZKwRK1X0w==t in people’s life.From 2008 to 2012， people’s diet changed a lot in our city.Grain was no longer regarded as the main food. And as the proportion of fruit and vegetables dropped， more milk and meat are drunk and eaten.

What caused these changes？There are two main reasons. One is that with the development of science， people began to realize the importance of keeping a balanced diet.The other is that people had more money to spend and could afford more expensive food.They tried to change their low-priced diet into a more varied one.They were eager to build up a strong body by improving their living standards.

With the development of our economy and the improvement of our food supply， further changes will take place in people’s diet.

題目二：

We are for the Internet.And we strongly believe the Internet is a good help in our daily life and study. On the Internet， for example，we can learn news both at home and abroad as well as all kinds of other information which you cannot find so quickly and easily in other places.Also， we can send messages by e-mail， make phone calls and so on.On the Internet，we can to schools， read various kinds of books and learn foreign languages.For entertainment，we can play chess or cards in our spare time.