短文改錯

（一）

Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei

Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows， its famous 1. _______

mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 2. _______

was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 3. _______

the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we 4. _______

climbed the mountain， we fed monkeys， visiting temples 5. _______

and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 6. _______

since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 7. _______

Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at 8. _______

the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and 9. _______

the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep

at the moment my head touched the pillow. 10. _______

（二）

What should you do when your parents become 1. _______

angry？ If your parents got mad， try to have a conversation 2. _______

with them about it. Remembering not to shout 3. _______

at them. They usually will try to change， but they will 4. _______

take some time because they get angry all their life， and that 5. _______

is all they know. You might have to change for your 6. _______

method a couple of times. Do any nice things for your 7. _______

parents that they dont expect—like cooking，

doing the dishes， washing clothes， or clean 8. _______

the floors. If this doesnt work， bring in friend that you 9. _______

feel comfortable， and have him or her help you. 10. _______

（三）

Many teachers worry about the effects of television on young

people. According to studies， any children spend more time 1. _______

watching television than they spend in school. Because so 2. _______

much viewing， children may not be develop the habit of 3. _______

read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries 4. _______

much about the radio program young people listen to， 5. _______

although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder 6. _______

about the effects of television commercials. On one year the 7. _______

average child will see 25，000 television commercials， all 8. _______

planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want 9. _______

things that they dont real need. 10. _______

（四）

When I first learned to write in English， I ran into 1. _______

many difficulties. The main problem was in that I 2. _______

always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything 3. _______

into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. 4. _______

I followed her advice and should put down 100 words 5. _______

or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on 6. _______

paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. 7. _______

One day I wrote a little story and showed to my 8. _______

teacher. She liked it very much and reads it to the class. 9. _______

They all said the story was a good one. Their word were 10. _______

a great encouragement to me.

短文改錯答案詳解

（一）

1. famous 前加 a。mountain 為可數(shù)名詞。又是第一次被談及，故應(yīng)在 famous 前加不定冠詞。

2. 此行無錯。

3. noon 后加 when。It was about noon 是主句，后面的應(yīng)為從句，故在 noon 后加when，此處 when 意為“在……時候”。

4. them 改為 us。綜觀全文可知，此文是用第一人稱的口吻來敘述的。

5. visiting 改為 visited。此處climbed，visited 和 told 構(gòu)成并列謂語。

6. picture 改為 pictures。

7. passes 改為 passed。應(yīng)與全文時態(tài)一致。

8. 刪去 down。

9. and 改為 but。飯菜很貴不是一件令人愉快的事， 而服務(wù)質(zhì)量很高確實是一件好事，故前后為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。

10. 刪去 at。the moment直接引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句。

（二）

1. 此行無錯。

2. got 改為get。通讀全篇，可知道本文基本時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

3. Remembering 改為 Remember。本句為祈使句，表示建議，主語省略。

4. they 改為 it。they 前為轉(zhuǎn)折連詞 but，表明其后為一個句子，這里應(yīng)用 it 代表前面整個句子。如：Toms mother kept telling him that he should study harder， but it didnt help。此處的代詞 it，代替“Toms mother kept telling him that he should study harder”這一句子的內(nèi)容。

5. life 改為 lives。這是考查名詞的數(shù)，life 是可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)，句子主語用的是they，與其一致應(yīng)用lives。

6. 刪去 for。因為 change 作“改換”講時為及物動詞。如： Can you change me one yuan note？你能兌換一元零錢給我嗎？而 change for作“轉(zhuǎn)換車到……”解。如： Where should you change for Guilin？ 你在什么地方轉(zhuǎn)車到桂林去？

7. any 改為 some。any 一般用于疑問句、否定句、條件從句中，而 some 一般用于肯定句中。此處為祈使肯定式，故用 some。

8. clean 改為 cleaning。應(yīng)與 cooking， doing， washing 一致，作介詞賓語。

9. friend 前加 a。friend 為普通可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)， 其前應(yīng)加不定冠詞 a。

10. comfortable 后加 with。comfortable with 意為“與……自在/愉快”。例如：She feels comfortable with those who speaks English。她和講英語的人談話覺得很自在。

（三）

1. any 改為 many/some。根據(jù)句意，此處應(yīng)表示“一些， 許多”，而 any 表示“一些”時，常常用于否定句、疑問句和條件句中。

2. Because 后面加 of。此處 so much viewing 相當(dāng)于一個名詞，故加 of。

3. 刪去 be。此處 may not develop 已經(jīng)構(gòu)成謂語動詞部分，be 屬于多余。

4. read 改為 reading。of 為介詞，后面需要接名詞、代詞、動名詞作賓語。

5. program 改為 programs。program 為可數(shù)名詞，且根據(jù)句意，此處應(yīng)為復(fù)數(shù)概念。

6. noise 改為 noisy。noise 為名詞，noisy 為形容詞。此處應(yīng)用形容詞構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)。

7. On 改為 In。根據(jù)上下文邏輯，此處意為“在一年中”。

8. 此行無錯。

9. 刪去第二個 to。make sb. do sth. 為固定搭配，意為“讓某人做某事”。

10. real 改為really。此處應(yīng)用副詞修飾謂語動詞 dont need。

（四）

1. 此行無錯。

2. 刪去 in。根據(jù)句意及句子結(jié)構(gòu)，此處為表語從句。

3. anything 改為 everything。此處為肯定句，anything 意為“任何一件事”，側(cè)重個體；而 everything 意為“一切事情”，側(cè)重整體。

4. my 改為 a。keep a diary 為固定短語，意為“記日記”。

5. 刪去 should。and 連接兩個并列的平行結(jié)構(gòu)，前后時態(tài)均為一般過去時態(tài)。

6. talk 改為 talking。enjoy doing 為固定用法。故此處必須用動名詞作賓語。

7. me 改為 myself。express oneself 為固定短語。

8. showed 后加 it。show 為及物動詞，后面應(yīng)接賓語。

9. reads 改為 read。and 連接兩個并列的平行結(jié)構(gòu)，前后時態(tài)均為一般過去時態(tài)。

10. word 改為 words。根據(jù)句意，此處應(yīng)為“他們的話語，”用 words。