如何寫(xiě)有關(guān)德育教育方面的英語(yǔ)作文

【寫(xiě)作任務(wù)】

在教育的廣闊天地里，德育教育如同一股清泉，滋養(yǎng)著每一個(gè)年輕的心靈。德育教育不僅傳授知識(shí)，更能塑造品德、完善人格和引導(dǎo)價(jià)值觀，為青少年的成長(zhǎng)之路鋪設(shè)堅(jiān)實(shí)的基石。

為落實(shí)立德樹(shù)人根本任務(wù)，各學(xué)校圍繞德育教育舉辦了一系列的活動(dòng)，根據(jù)下面思維導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容提示，以“Moral（德育）Education”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹如何踐行德育教育。

要求：

1.書(shū)寫(xiě)認(rèn)真規(guī)范，詞數(shù)不少于100詞，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2.短文必須包括所有要點(diǎn)提示，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。

Moral Education

As teenagers， we are the hope of our country. To be excellent teenagers， let me tell you how to improve our moral education. " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " " "

【試題分析】

本文是一篇材料性命題式書(shū)面表達(dá)試題，寫(xiě)作體裁是一篇說(shuō)明文。試題要求我們根據(jù)提示信息要點(diǎn)，圍繞著“Moral Education”這個(gè)主題來(lái)撰寫(xiě)一篇說(shuō)明文，介紹你從家庭、學(xué)校和社會(huì)等方面接受到的德育教育，表達(dá)自己的感想并作出點(diǎn)評(píng)。

本文話題屬于學(xué)校生活范疇，話題主題是人與社會(huì)，由此可知所寫(xiě)德育教育內(nèi)容與我們中學(xué)生日常學(xué)習(xí)生活密切相關(guān)。大家接受的德育教育可能來(lái)自于家庭教育、學(xué)校道德與法治學(xué)科教育、各個(gè)學(xué)科情感價(jià)值觀教育、朋友交往等社會(huì)活動(dòng)各個(gè)方面。依據(jù)本文特點(diǎn)，我們可以采取如下三步法來(lái)撰寫(xiě)本文：

第一步，點(diǎn)明主題，說(shuō)明本文要介紹踐行德育教育。

第二步，詳細(xì)介紹如何踐行德育教育。

第三步，總結(jié)全文，對(duì)德育教育做出點(diǎn)評(píng)。

【注意事項(xiàng)】

1.本文是一篇說(shuō)明文，所寫(xiě)句子以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱(chēng)屬于第一人稱(chēng)。

2.不要遺漏題干給出的要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，靈活運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫?，使行文流暢自然?/p>

【范文欣賞】

Moral Education

As teenagers， we are the hope of our country. To be excellent teenagers， let me tell you how to improve our moral education.

Firstly， at home， we should do some housework. ①We should also save electricity and water when using them. As for the relationship with our parents， we should have a good communication with them.

Secondly， at school， we should obey the school rules. ②The harder we study， the better we will be in the future. And we should have more creativity.

③What’s more， we can take part in some volunteer activities in our free time. We can plant more trees to protect the environment. And we should try our best to save animals.

Last but not least， we should love our country. ④We should try our best to spread our culture and make our dreams come true."

⑤In a word， as a student， we should not only study hard， but also have good moral character. In the future we’ll build our country and make our country stronger and stronger.

【亮點(diǎn)分析】

①現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)“when using them”句式簡(jiǎn)潔，語(yǔ)意表達(dá)清晰，它的使用是本文的一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)。

②比較等級(jí)句型“The harder we...， the better we will be...”的表達(dá)最能吸引讀者眼球，彰顯了作者具有扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言基本功底和語(yǔ)言駕馭能力。

③本文是說(shuō)明文，文中運(yùn)用了firstly， secondly， what’s more等承接上下文的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)，使得文章上下文過(guò)渡自然、段落層次分明。

④短語(yǔ)“try one’s best”及句型“make... do sth.”能給讀者留下深刻印象，增強(qiáng)了文章的可讀性。

⑤“not only... but also...”并列句的運(yùn)用豐富了文章的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，增強(qiáng)了語(yǔ)言表達(dá)力。

【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

本文要點(diǎn)全面、條理清晰、語(yǔ)言流暢、亮點(diǎn)頗多。作者能夠用英語(yǔ)介紹德育教育的途徑、方法及其意義。文中的句式使用規(guī)范且嫻熟，比較狀語(yǔ)從句、并列句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)等的使用，彰顯出作者駕馭語(yǔ)言的突出能力。Firstly， secondly， communicate with， take part in， try one’s best等詞匯和短語(yǔ)在文中的靈活運(yùn)用，更增添了文章的色彩，增強(qiáng)了可讀性。

【寫(xiě)作演練】

十年樹(shù)木，百年樹(shù)人。青少年是國(guó)家的希望，少年強(qiáng)則國(guó)強(qiáng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿，談?wù)勅绾纬蔀橐幻玫那嗌倌辍?/p>

要點(diǎn)：

（1） 你認(rèn)為中國(guó)當(dāng)代青少年應(yīng)該具備什么品質(zhì)；

（2） 你認(rèn)為怎么做才能成為更好的青少年。

要求：（1） 根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

（2） 文中不得出現(xiàn)個(gè)人真實(shí)的姓名和校名；

（3） 詞數(shù) 80詞左右。

參考詞匯：keep one’s promise 遵守諾言；be thankful to sb.對(duì)某人心存感激；creative有創(chuàng)造力的；beauty美；nature自然；protect保護(hù)；activity活動(dòng)

【參考范文】

How to Be a Better Teenager

Boys and girls，

My name is Li Hua. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager with you. As a teenager， I think we should be healthy， creative， honest and thankful. The most important thing is that we must love our country and home.

China is a great country with a long history. We should work hard to make our country stronger and stronger. The more knowledge we learn， the brighter future we will have. We need to keep our promises. Be honest and never lie. We should be thankful to those who have helped us. It is necessary for us to be active.

And we must be good at finding the beauty of nature. It is important for us to love nature and protect the environment. It is helpful to take exercise， which keeps us healthy both physically and mentally. What’s more， we can take part in all kinds of activities in and out of school like planting trees.

All in all， if we show our love in our daily life， we can be anyone we want to be.

That’s all. Thanks for listening.