The Sport I Prefer

Hello，everyone！ I am very glad to share my topic with you. It is universally acknowledged that sports play an important role in our lives， which make our lives more colorful and interesting. As for me， I prefer playing basketball.

The reason why I enjoy playing basketball is that it not only enriches my life but also keeps me happy when I am upset. It is this sport that makes me full of energy and confidence. I still remember when I played it at first. I was not proficient. My PE teacher， who is always there for us when we are in trouble， encouraged us with warm words. What he told me was that nothing is impossible if you have a willing heart. Persisting in practicing basketball every day， my diligent efforts finally paid off， bringing me great confidence.

In conclusion， I consider this sport as a symbol of fighting. I will keep practicing it！

河南省鄭州金桂中學(xué)

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這篇文章有效表達(dá)了“我”對籃球運(yùn)動(dòng)的熱愛及其給“我”帶來的積極影響。通過“enriches my life”“keeps me happy”等表述，展現(xiàn)了籃球如何豐富生活、帶來快樂；同時(shí)，

運(yùn)用強(qiáng)調(diào)句式“It is this sport that...”進(jìn)一步凸顯了籃球的重要性。用詞貼切，敘述條理清晰，能夠很好地激發(fā)讀者對籃球運(yùn)動(dòng)的興趣，引起共鳴。