2022年高考熱門話題寫作預(yù)測（16）：交通與旅游

四川 蔣建平（特級教師）

Part 1 激活·素養(yǎng)解讀

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Part 2 晨讀·素材積累

Ⅰ.讀典題·知考向

假定你是李華，今年暑假與父母去了拉薩旅游。請根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)用英語寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

1.對旅游列車的描述；

2.沿途風(fēng)光；

3.你的感受。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：服務(wù)員attendant 拉薩Lhasa

◆范文晨誦

I will never forget my first trip to Lhasa.I went there with my parents during this summer vacation.

The cruise train is wide,bright and modern,which makes it quite comfortable.The attendants on the train provided us with the best service.Smiling faces and polite words were around us all the time.What's more,I appreciated the beautiful scenery all the way.The large,snow-covered mountains,the endless grassland and some villages in the mountains made me excited.

It was really an unforgettable journey.I look forward to travelling there again.

◆模板提煉

如何寫游記

I took a trip to _______________（地點(diǎn)）with _______________（同行人員）during_______________（時(shí)間）.It took us_______________（時(shí)間）to _______________（交通方式 ）to ________________（目 的 地 ）from_________________（始發(fā)地）.We stayed in__________________（居住地點(diǎn)）.On the first day,________________ （具體行程）.On the second day,________________ （同行人員）and I went to _______________（景點(diǎn)）._______________（景點(diǎn)描述）.When we got there,________________（景點(diǎn)狀況）._______________（景點(diǎn)活動）._______________（購買的物品描述）.On the third day,_______________（具體行程）.________________（描述景點(diǎn)狀況）.________________（景點(diǎn)活動及感受）.The other days,I went to _____________（其他旅游景點(diǎn)）.________________（景點(diǎn)活動及感受）.

如何介紹城市

Welcome to my hometown—the city of_______________（城市名稱）.

________________（城市名稱）is________________（城市位置及其特點(diǎn)）.The climate here is ________________（氣候特征及其對城市的影響）.The scenery is_______________（描述風(fēng)景概貌）.________________（概述吸引游客的風(fēng)景）._______________ （描述具體的自然風(fēng)景）.What's more,_____________（描述當(dāng)?shù)厝宋娘L(fēng)情）._______________（當(dāng)?shù)孛朗掣攀觯?

I'm sure you will have a wonderful time in my hometown.

◆靚句積累

1.直到五年后我再次回到家鄉(xiāng)時(shí)，我才發(fā)現(xiàn)它的變化如此之大。

（基礎(chǔ)表達(dá)）I didn't realize how great the change was until five years later when I went back to my hometown.

（高級表達(dá)）It was not until five years later when I went back to my hometown that I realized how great the change was.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)

2.她打包好東西后，她的父母為她送行。

（基礎(chǔ)表達(dá)）She packed up all her luggage,and her parents saw her off.

（高級表達(dá)）With all her luggage packed up,her parents saw her off.（含with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）

3.通過這次旅游，她更多地了解了外面的世界，從而拓寬了她的知識面。

（基礎(chǔ)表達(dá)）From the tour,she learnt more about the outside world,and it broadened her knowledge.

（高級表達(dá)）From the tour,she learnt more about the outside world,which broadened her knowledge.（含非限制性定語從句）

4.一到達(dá)山頂，我們就深深地被這里美麗的風(fēng)景所吸引。

（基礎(chǔ)表達(dá)）Immediately we arrived at the top of the hill,the beautiful scenery attracted us deeply.

（高級表達(dá)）On arriving at the top of the hill,we were deeply attracted by the beautiful scenery.（on+V-ing形式）

5.正如大家所知道的，華山因它險(xiǎn)峻的懸崖而出名。

（基礎(chǔ)表達(dá)）We all know that Mount Huashan is famous for its breathtaking cliffs.

（高級表達(dá)）As is known to us all,Mount Huashan is famous for its breathtaking cliffs.（含非限制性定語從句）

6.到了我們應(yīng)該高度重視保護(hù)環(huán)境的時(shí)候了。

（基礎(chǔ)表達(dá)）It's time for us to pay much attention to protecting our environment.

（高級表達(dá)）It's high time that we paid much attention to protecting our environment.（含It's high time that...句型）

Ⅱ.讀詞句·積語料

一、話題表達(dá)

核心單詞：

1.subway/underground n.地鐵

2.helicopter n.直升機(jī)

3.motorcycle n.摩托車

4.abroad adv.在/到國外

5.crowded adj.擁擠的

6.destination n.目的地；終點(diǎn)

7.queue n.行列；隊(duì)

8.impress v.留下極深的印象

impression n.印象

impressive adj.給人深刻印象的；令人難忘的

9.well-organized adj.組織良好的

10.trip n.旅行；短程旅游

11.journey n.行程；旅程

12.tour n.游覽；旅游；旅行

13.voyage n.航海；航行；航程

14.adventure n.冒險(xiǎn)；奇遇

15.outdoors adv.在戶外/野外

16.parking n.停車

17.souvenir n.紀(jì)念品

高頻短語：

1.be/get stuck in被困在……

2.check in登記入住

3.check out結(jié)賬離開

4.put up投宿

5.take off起飛

6.rush hour（上下班的）高峰期

7.traffic jam交通堵塞

8.traffic signal/light交通信號燈

9.obey/observe traffic regulations遵守交通規(guī)則

10.run the red light闖紅燈

11.an organized travel一場有組織的旅游

12.go on a hiking trip進(jìn)行徒步旅行

13.be on a visit to a place在參觀/訪問某地

14.places of interest名勝

15.scenic spot風(fēng)景區(qū)

16.be surrounded with/by被……環(huán)繞

17.be aimed at針對；旨在

18.break the speed limit超速

19.speed up加速

20.slow down放慢速度

21.set off出發(fā)

22.get close to nature接近大自然

23.be the home of/be home to是……之鄉(xiāng)/的樂土

24.enjoy the reputation of有……的美譽(yù)

提分靚句：

1.thus+V-ing形式

People prefer to choose high-speed trains because they move very fast,thus shortening the travelling time.人們更喜歡選擇高速列車，因?yàn)楦咚倭熊囘\(yùn)行速度很快，從而縮短旅行時(shí)間。

2.“no matter+疑問詞”引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句

No matter how many subway lines,buses,trams,trains,and other public conveyances we ride,we are rarely left with a good impression of the upholstery.無論我們坐多少次地鐵、公共汽車、有軌電車、火車和其他公共交通工具，我們很少會對座位墊襯套留下一個(gè)好的印象。

3.be always doing sth

I'm always dreaming about my next trip and I'm often scouring the Web for exciting new vacation destinations.我總是夢想著我的下一次旅行，并且我經(jīng)常在網(wǎng)上搜令人興奮的新的度假目的地。

4.過去分詞短語作狀語

Attracted by its natural beauty,we couldn't help taking lots of pictures,cherishing the wonderful memories close to nature and history.我們被它的自然美景所吸引，忍不住拍了很多照片，以此來留住與自然和歷史親近的美好記憶。

5.強(qiáng)調(diào)句型

It was through this traveling that I realized not only did I increase more knowledge,but I also broadened my horizons and strengthened my love for my family.正是通過此次旅游，我意識到我不僅增長了知識，而且還開闊了視野，同時(shí)也加深了對家人的愛。

6.主語從句

What makes it distinguishable from other resorts is that it is rich in natural resources and primitive forests.與其他景區(qū)不同的是，這里自然資源豐富，還有原始森林。

二、續(xù)寫金庫

1.People love to travel,not to reach their destination,but to enjoy the pleasure of the journey.人之所以愛旅行，不是為了抵達(dá)目的地，而是為了享受旅途中的種種樂趣。

2.A true traveler is a tramp,who experiences joy,temptation and adventure.A journey must be a wandering,or it will not be a journey.一個(gè)真正的旅行家必定是一個(gè)經(jīng)歷著快樂、誘惑和冒險(xiǎn)的流浪者。旅行必是流浪式的，否則便不稱其為旅行。

3.The advantage of travel is that you can be far away from the daily life,and you don't have to bear the responsibilities of the daily trifles.旅行的好處在于你可以暫時(shí)遠(yuǎn)離日常生活，還不必承擔(dān)日?，嵤碌呢?zé)任。

4.Cuihu is not only a lake,but also a road.There are lakes in the city,which do not hinder traffic.翠湖不僅是一片湖，也是一條路。城中有一些湖，它們并不妨礙交通。

5.The roads on the hillside are mostly along the bank.Although the cliff is on one side,the cliff is not close to the side,and the ditch is on the other side.You will feel dizzy when you look at it.山坡上的路多是沿畔，雖一邊靠崖，卻不貼崖，另一邊臨溝，望之便要頭暈。

6.When the play should start,more and more people gathered outside,cutting off the street and blocking the traffic.The number of people far exceeded the capacity of the theater.在戲應(yīng)該開場的時(shí)候，門外的人越聚越多，隔斷了街道，堵塞了交通。人數(shù)遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)超出劇場能容納的數(shù)量。

Part 3 晚練·素養(yǎng)檢測

你校正在組織英語作文比賽，請以“A holiday I have taken”為題，寫一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括：

1.去哪里度了假；

2.假期中做了什么。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

A holiday I have taken

Last winter vacation,I went to Hainan with my parents.________________________