安全與急救話題作文探究（二）

楊慶春

【寫(xiě)作任務(wù)】

（2019·湖南·衡陽(yáng)）根據(jù)一項(xiàng)新的調(diào)查，學(xué)生安全已經(jīng)成為一個(gè)大的問(wèn)題。假設(shè)你是一名老師，對(duì)學(xué)生進(jìn)行以“自我保護(hù)”為主題的消防安全教育，請(qǐng)以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”為題，提出你的建議。

要求：1. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名;

2.書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，語(yǔ)句通順、連貫，詞數(shù)不少于80。

參考詞匯：cover v. 遮蓋? ? take the lift乘坐電梯? ? exit n.出口? towel n.毛巾? shut off 切斷

【寫(xiě)作思路與分析】

本文是一篇命題式作文。試題要求學(xué)生以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”為題寫(xiě)出如何在火災(zāi)中進(jìn)行自我保護(hù)。此文屬于安全與救護(hù)這個(gè)話題，所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容與我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪械陌踩逃o密相關(guān)。根據(jù)題目?jī)?nèi)容，我們最好按照三段式方法來(lái)拓展全文：第一段引出主題;第二段具體介紹火災(zāi)中自我保護(hù)的方法;第三段提出自己的建議和主張。寫(xiě)作中要用上所給提示詞語(yǔ)，盡量運(yùn)用熟悉的詞語(yǔ)和句型去寫(xiě)，同時(shí)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象力讓全文更有獨(dú)特性和邏輯性。

★ 寫(xiě)作信息要點(diǎn)：

1. 開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題;

2. 具體介紹火災(zāi)中自我保護(hù)的方法;

3. 表達(dá)主張和建議。

★ 注意事項(xiàng)：

1.文章所用的時(shí)態(tài)要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主;

2.盡量使用過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)和句子，使文章更加具有合理性和完整性。

【范文展示】

How to Protect Yourself in a Fire

According to a new survey， student safety has become a big problem. So， our school thinks it is necessary to teach students how to protect themselves in a fire.

And here comes the methods. First， we should keep calm and find the exit quickly. You’d better walk the stairs instead of taking the lift. Second， we should cut off the electricity in the house in case we could get hurt by it. Next， we should cover our nose with a wet cloth or a wet towel， because the fire will burn something and will release a kind of poison gas. Last， we should try our best to get out of the fire as quickly as possible.

This is our school’s methods that have taught us. I think they are very useful for us.

【實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練】

校園欺凌行為是違法行為，我們要堅(jiān)決制止。請(qǐng)結(jié)合以下提示，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School”為題，寫(xiě)一篇80-100詞的英語(yǔ)短文，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名。

提示：

1. 謹(jǐn)慎交友;

2. 不參與打架斗毆;

3. 面對(duì)校園欺凌怎樣自我保護(hù)。

參考詞匯： 1. self-protection自我保護(hù) ? ? 2. bully n./v.欺凌

3. personal safety人身安全 ? ? 4. have violent behaviors打架斗毆

One possible version：

How Can We Protect Ourselves at School

School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school， we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt， so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school.

We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. For example， we should stay calm before a bullying behavior happens. We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly， we will learn how to have a self-protection because our personal safety is the most important. Secondly， we should be peaceful with others at all times and can’t have any violent behavior. Finally， obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.

I’m hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future， do you think so？