怎樣寫好安慰信

吳安運(yùn)

◎文體概述

朋友或同學(xué)考試失利、親友生病、受傷或由于火災(zāi)、水災(zāi)、被盜等不幸事件蒙受了損失，我們都可以寫封信表示安慰。安慰信要寫得真誠(chéng)，注意措辭。寫安慰信時(shí)一定要圍繞一個(gè)中心——使收信人從中得到安慰和鼓舞。

模板范文

Dear Tom，

Im very sorry to hear that you are seriously ill and that you have been in hospital for about two weeks. We are very concerned about you and your studies.

Our head teacher is coming to see you today， so we ask him to bring you a package， with some lucky stars and colorful paper cranes in it. I hope you will like it and it will bring good luck to you. Also youll receive 10，000 yuan， which will help you pay the medical fees. Dont worry about your studies. Well try to help you make up the lessons you have missed， because we are good friends. I hope I can come and see you soon on Sunday.

Everyone in our class misses you very much， hoping youll be well again and get back soon.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

◎經(jīng)典句型

篇首句：表達(dá)慰問(wèn)事由

1.I feel very sad to know that there was... 聽(tīng)說(shuō)發(fā)生了……我感到非常難過(guò)。

2.I was shocked at the news about the earthquake in... 聽(tīng)聞……地震的消息我很震驚。

3.Seeing the related...， I could not help... 看到相關(guān)的……，我禁不住……

4.We are so sorry to hear the news about... 聽(tīng)到……的消息我們很難過(guò)。

5.I just heard that youve been on the sickness last week. 我剛剛得知上個(gè)星期你病了。

6.I was deeply concerned when I learned that... 當(dāng)?shù)弥瓡r(shí)，我非常擔(dān)心。

7.I just cant tell you how sorry I was to learn of your... 獲悉你……時(shí)，我難以形容我有多難過(guò)。

8.I read about the recent events in the newspaper and I am writing to extend my deepest sadness. 我從報(bào)紙上得知了最近的事情，寫信表達(dá)我深切的悲痛。

篇尾句：鼓勵(lì)與問(wèn)候

1.Still you have many more chances to try. 你仍然有很多機(jī)會(huì)可以嘗試。

2.Im certainly relieved to know that. 知道這一情況后，我心中感到很寬慰。

3.I am sure you will easily succeed next time. 我相信你下次會(huì)輕松地取得成功。

4.I quite understand how you feel now. 我非常理解你現(xiàn)在的感受。

5.Please pass my concern on to your parents. 請(qǐng)代我向你的父母問(wèn)好。

6.So I hope that you will not take this to heart， and will get ready to try again. 因此，希望你不要太在意這件事，準(zhǔn)備好再試一次。

7.I hope you like it， and that it will help to pass the time more pleasantly. 我希望你喜歡它，并希望它能幫助你更愉快地度過(guò)時(shí)光。

8.With every good wish for your swift recovery. 衷心祝愿你盡快恢復(fù)健康。

9.We are looking forward to/hoping/praying for your speedy and full recovery. 我們希望/祈禱你能早日完全康復(fù)。

10.Please extend our deep sympathy to your family. 請(qǐng)向你的家人轉(zhuǎn)達(dá)我們的深切慰問(wèn)。

11.If there is anything I can do to help you， please let me know. 如果有需要我?guī)椭牡胤?，?qǐng)告訴我。

12.If you need any help， please do not hesitate to contact us. 如果你需要任何幫助，請(qǐng)隨時(shí)聯(lián)系我們。

◎典例鏈接

（2017屆山西省五校高三第四次聯(lián)考）假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Jack因爸爸過(guò)度飲酒而感到非常苦惱，就此請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封郵件。主要內(nèi)容包括：

1.表示安慰：

2.給出建議;

3.寄予希望。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文流暢;

3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jack，

Im sorry to hear that your father is addicted to drinking.

Best wishes. Im looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

【試題解讀】

1.審題立意

該篇書面表達(dá)的命題思路采用的是應(yīng)用文的考查形式，是提綱類作文，但其形式又是以郵件的模式給出，而最終又要求考生用近年來(lái)高考較為普遍的書信體裁進(jìn)行寫作，體現(xiàn)了高考命題的穩(wěn)定性。

從測(cè)試內(nèi)容上來(lái)看，寫作的主題為“安慰朋友并提出建議”，這提醒考生要關(guān)注生活，雖看似平淡，但事實(shí)上教育學(xué)生要關(guān)愛(ài)他人，珍惜生命。

從寫作提示上來(lái)看，試題仍然具有一定的開(kāi)放性，給各位考生留出了一定的自由發(fā)揮空間，有利于考生充分展示自己的英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)能力。這次英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)試題還是采用了以往的書信形式， 試題中已經(jīng)寫好了開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾，考生不必考慮和擔(dān)心書信格式的問(wèn)題，可以直接按照材料提示的有關(guān)內(nèi)容進(jìn)入主題，這有利于幫助考生增強(qiáng)信心，順利答題。

2.寫作要點(diǎn)

（1）導(dǎo)入話題;

（2）安慰朋友;

（3）給出建議;

（4）寄予希望。

3.注意事項(xiàng)

（1）注意文章內(nèi)容的詳略，建議部分要詳寫，另兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容略寫;

（2）語(yǔ)氣要真誠(chéng)中肯。

【佳作賞析】

Dear Jack，

Im sorry to hear that your father is addicted to drinking. Dont worry. Im always here， ready to help you①.

As is known， getting rid of drinking is not easy， so you should be patient with it and give your father a little time. First of all②， find out why your father is addicted to drinking and try to communicate with him about this. Then②， you should think of ways that fit your fathers situation. Maybe changing your fathers taste， like drinking tea instead of wine， is a good choice③. Besides②， it is important to make your father know the potential danger of drinking. Also②， you can ask doctors for help. I hope the suggestions are available④ to you and your father will be happier and healthier with the help.

Best wishes. Im looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?亮點(diǎn)分析：本篇習(xí)作將建議一條條列舉出來(lái)，使人一目了然，且思路清唽，交代非常清楚。字里行間情真意切，讀來(lái)非常感人。運(yùn)用了一些適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞及高級(jí)句式結(jié)構(gòu)，如形容詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)、動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)、定語(yǔ)從句等，同時(shí)

available等高級(jí)詞匯的使用，也使文章增色不少，總的來(lái)說(shuō)是一篇好文章。

①作者沒(méi)有用兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句或并列句的形式來(lái)表達(dá)，而是獨(dú)辟蹊徑，使用了形容詞短語(yǔ)ready to help you作伴隨狀語(yǔ)。

②作者用First of all、Then、Besides和Also等過(guò)渡詞一條一條地陳述他的建議，層次分明。

③作者在此用動(dòng)名詞形式changing your fathers taste作句子主語(yǔ)，后面還對(duì)這個(gè)做法進(jìn)行舉例，語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用非常老道。

④作者在這里運(yùn)用了高級(jí)詞匯available，一詞勝千言，言簡(jiǎn)意深，足見(jiàn)作者的語(yǔ)言能力?！蛐≡嚺５?/p>

假定你是李華，你收到美國(guó)好友Jack的來(lái)信，他說(shuō)他期末考試考得不好，受到父母的批評(píng)，情緒很低落。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給Jack寫一封信：

1.安慰對(duì)方;

2.正確對(duì)待考試;

3.與父母多溝通;

4.鼓勵(lì)對(duì)方。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Jack，

Yours，

Li Hua