Artificial intelligence (AI) is a technology that lets machines do things that require “thinking”. It is hard to explain it clearly because AI isn’t just one thing. Rather, it’s a group of technologies that help machines get, understand and use information to do tasks. The range of technologies is one of the reasons people use so many different expressions to describe AI. In addition to artificial intelligence, expressions like machine learning and deep learning are common.
No matter which expression is used, recent developments have received a lot of media "attention. Some have welcomed the technology because of things that AI makes possible. But the media attention has also produced a lot of fear. Many are especially keeping a watchful eye on the effects AI could have on people’s jobs.
According to a recent study, nearly five percent of jobs will disappear because of AI.High on the list are jobs in the manufacturing and mining industries,where systems powered by AI are already performing tasks that people used to do. In the future, self-driving cars and trucks that depend on AI will also reduce jobs for drivers.
On the other hand, AI will also create many new jobs. More people will be needed to write software for AI systems as well as to set up and operate them.
At the same time, jobs that require emotional intelligence, excellent communication skills and interaction with people will not be replaced by AI.
According to this passage,who may not easily lose jobs in the future?
AI技術(shù)的快速發(fā)展給人們的學習和生活帶來了巨大的變化,同時也引發(fā)了人們對于人工智能取代人類的擔憂??偠灾?,正如事物都有兩面性,AI產(chǎn)品既有優(yōu)點也有缺點。假如你是李華,受邀參加“Teenager Says”演講活動,請說說你對人工智能的看法。
Dear friends,
With the development of AI technology and the advantage of ChatGPT, many people are worried about that AI will replace humans. In my opinion, there is no need for people to worry too much about the development of AI. AI will never completely take the place of human being. Instead, it has many advantages.
First, it can help people solve many difficult jobs. Second, it can also replace in completing those dangerous tasks and make people less tired and safer. Finally, it can also provide many jobs for people. For example, AI needs people to operate and repair.
In conclusion, AI is useful for our lives. We should accept and make use of it.
作為演講稿,首段應該添加一句開場白,使發(fā)言稿的語境更自然,與聽眾的交流更真實。
第一段闡述觀點時有重復結(jié)構(gòu)的句子,需要合理進行合并,使邏輯性更強,語言簡潔清晰。
第二段分享AI帶來的好處,但第一點和第二點邏輯性不強,承擔許多困難的工作和完成危險的任務有一些重復。另外,在談論事情的兩面性時,兩個方面都要提及。
本文是一篇演講稿,所以應該添加結(jié)尾段,使演講稿更加完整。
Dear friends,
I’m glad to be invited to join this activity. With the rapid development of science and technology, the artificial intelligence becomes more and more popular.
Many people are worried about that AI will replace humans. In my opinion, AI will never completely take the place of human being. Instead, it has many advantages.
First, it can help people solve many difficult jobs and make people less tired and safer. Second, it can help the students do homework correctly and solve the subject problems. Besides, it can design pictures in a short time.
However, it also has many disadvantages. lf we always depend on it, it will make us lazy in mind. It will also reduce people’s job opportunities.
Thank you for your attention.
這是一篇發(fā)言稿,在升格文中,小作者正確使用了發(fā)言稿的格式書寫,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,內(nèi)容完整。文章開門見山,講述AI技術(shù)很受歡迎;第二段提出擔憂,小作者表明自己的觀點;第三段運用了連詞“First, Second”等使文段更具邏輯性,在使用具體論據(jù)時有邏輯、有層次地支持自己的論點;最后一段再次提出觀點的另一面,強調(diào)AI技術(shù)的發(fā)展也會帶來一些弊端。全文句式以簡單句為主,但條理清晰。