My Dream
2024-12-23 00:00:00江蘇省泰州市醫(yī)藥高新區(qū)侯燕“體認英語”名師工作室
閱讀(快樂英語高年級) 2024年10期
這是一篇關于理想的作文，學生可以從夢想是什么（what）、為什么有這樣的夢想（why）、怎樣實現(xiàn)夢想（how）等方面入手。學生在實際生活中可以體察、體認不同職業(yè)的特點，樹立理想信念，形成正確的價值觀，為實現(xiàn)個人夢、中國夢而努力。
astronaut航天員
inventor發(fā)明家
postman郵遞員
scientist科學家
pilot飛行員
lawyer律師
artist藝術家
vet獸醫(yī)
doctor醫(yī)生
nurse護士
teacher教師
policeman警察
worker工人
writer作家
farmer農(nóng)民
care about
help sick people
make a lot of money
have a better life
make our country better
make people happy
invent（發(fā)明） useful things
keep people safe
help people
protect our country
help sick animals
catch bad guys
work at home
let people know the truth（真相）
make wonderful things
do scientific experiments（實驗）
study hard
read widely（廣泛地）
keep healthy
go to college（大學）
have a good education（教育）
practice a lot
learn more about
learn from
keep patient（有耐心的）
do sports
介紹自己的夢想，以及有這樣的夢想的原因。
I want to be a/ an... like...
I will be/ do... because... I remember... So I want to... I also want to...
介紹為了實現(xiàn)自己的夢想，自己會做些什么。
As the saying goes，“No pain， no gain.” To make my dream come true， I will...
A/ An... should...， so I will... What’s more， ...
總結，表明實現(xiàn)夢想的信心、決心。
Being a/ an... is not easy， but I will never give up. With my efforts， I believe my dream will come true.
?時態(tài)準確：關于理想的描述與原因的闡述，建議使用一般現(xiàn)在時；關于如何實現(xiàn)理想的闡述，可使用一般將來時。
?句意連貫：使用適當?shù)倪B接詞和過渡短語，使句意表達更連貫。
?語言優(yōu)美：恰當使用形容詞、副詞或名言警句等，更生動形象地表達情感、深化主題。
佳作發(fā)現(xiàn)地：江蘇省泰州市口岸小學五（6）班
指導老師：萬麗
Everyone has a dream. My dream is to be a scientist like Qian Xuesen， because science can make our country stronger and stronger.
To make my dream come true， I will study hard and never stop asking questions. I will do more scientific experiments， as the saying goes， “Experience is the mother of wisdom.” I believe that with my efforts， I will become a scientist in the future.
I have a big dream. I want to be a policeman because I want to help people and keep them safe.
A policeman needs to be strong to catch bad guys. To make my dream come true， I will exercise every day. I will study hard and learn about laws and important skills because a policeman should be able to solve problems.
I believe I will make my dream come true！
佳作發(fā)現(xiàn)地：江蘇省泰州市胡莊小學五（1）班
指導老師：史丹丹
I have a great dream. My dream is to be a great scientist like Qian Xuesen because I love science. Scientists make great contributions（貢獻） to our country. We have computers， mobile phones and many other things because of scientists. They make our lives better.
To make my dream come true， I will study hard and read more science books every day. I will also do more sports and keep healthy.
I hope my dream can come true because nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
Do you have a dream？ Of course！ Everyone has a dream and so do I.
I want to be a woman football player because I love playing football. I want to play and win for our country in the World Cup（世界杯） and the Olympic Games（奧林匹克運動會） someday.
To make my dream come true，I will play football every day. I will study hard and read more books about football. I will also learn from other players. I believe my dream can come true because “There is a will， there is a way.”
