My Great World

In my small world， everything is full of magic and beauty. My small world is a beautiful garden with colourful flowers， green grass， and a clear stream. Every morning， birds sing in the branches， and butterflies dance among the flowers.

In this small world， I have a tiny wooden house. There is a small mailbox on the door. The mailbox is always filled with letters and cards from my friends， and each letter brings me joy and surprise.

I like to sit by the stream and watch the little fish swim back and forth. Sometimes， I take out my paintbrushes and paper to draw the beautiful scenery around me.

My small world is filled with love and warmth.

深圳市南山區(qū)前海路陽光小學(xué)四（1）班 鄧博宇

指導(dǎo)老師 朱平平：

小作者用文字生動描繪了一個充滿愛與魔法的小世界。語言簡潔，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，情感真摯，充滿想象力和創(chuàng)造力。通過具體的細節(jié)描寫，如木屋、小溪等，展現(xiàn)了小作者對美好世界的向往和熱愛。