2022 年考研英語(yǔ)作文試題評(píng)析（二）

文/ 賈從永

一、小作文

Directions:

Suppose you are planning a campus food festival.Write an email to the international students in your university.

1) introduce the food festival;2) invite them to participate.

You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the email.Use “Zhang Wei”instead.

Do not write the address.(10 points)

2022 年考研英語(yǔ)（二）的小作文假設(shè)考生正在策劃一次校園美食節(jié)，要求考生給他們大學(xué)的外國(guó)留學(xué)生寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，介紹一下這次美食節(jié)并邀請(qǐng)留學(xué)生參加。電子郵件的格式與書(shū)信相同，從稱(chēng)呼開(kāi)始寫(xiě)起。稱(chēng)呼要頂格寫(xiě)，后面用逗號(hào)。由于郵件是寫(xiě)給外國(guó)留學(xué)生這個(gè)群體的，稱(chēng)呼不妨寫(xiě)Dear friends。

這封電子郵件的正文可以寫(xiě)成三段。由于這是一封公務(wù)信函，第一段可以先介紹自己的身份，接著表明寫(xiě)這封郵件的目的：邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方參加校園美食節(jié)。這樣我們就完成了題目中所規(guī)定的第二項(xiàng)交際任務(wù)（邀請(qǐng)留學(xué)生參加）。第二段要完成題目中第一項(xiàng)交際任務(wù)：介紹這次校園美食文化節(jié)。我們這時(shí)可以自由發(fā)揮，如介紹一下這次美食節(jié)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和具體安排等。順便說(shuō)一句，如果寫(xiě)作指令中規(guī)定了好幾項(xiàng)交際任務(wù)，這幾項(xiàng)任務(wù)在書(shū)信中都要有著落，但同時(shí)也要重點(diǎn)突出，主次分明。我們一般選擇容易展開(kāi)的那一項(xiàng)作為重點(diǎn)內(nèi)容來(lái)寫(xiě)。第三段再次邀請(qǐng)外國(guó)留學(xué)生參加這次校園美食節(jié)。這封電子郵件的最后是署名，寫(xiě)在正文下方中間偏右的位置，一般分兩行書(shū)寫(xiě)，上一行可寫(xiě)Yours sincerely，下一行寫(xiě)Zhang Wei，上下對(duì)齊。下面請(qǐng)看參考范文：

Dear friends,

I am the President of the Students’Union of Shanghai University.I am writing to invite you to participate in the campus food festival to be held next Saturday.

The event will take place in the No.4 Canteen from 18 p.m.to 20 p.m.on January 2,2022.A number of famous brands,such as Beijing Roast Duck,Goubuli Stuffed Bun and Yang’s Dumpling,will attend the festival.So it is a great opportunity for you to taste a variety of delicacies from many parts of China.

You are most welcome to the food festival.There will be 100 free vouchers available at the reception desk.First come,first served.

Yours sincerely,

Zhang Wei(117 words)

二、大作文

Directions:

Write an essay based on the chart below.In your writing, you should

1) interpret the chart, and

2) give your comments.

You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.(15 points)

2022 年考研英語(yǔ)（二）的大作文繼續(xù)考圖表作文，而且是繼2010、2011、2013、2014、2019、2021 年之后第七次考柱狀圖。作為歷年來(lái)被考得最多的一種圖表，柱狀圖的特點(diǎn)是形象直觀，一目了然。我們要寫(xiě)好這篇圖表作文，首先要仔細(xì)觀察圖表，找出圖表中的變化趨勢(shì)。圖表的標(biāo)題為我們準(zhǔn)確理解圖表提供了重要線索，因此看圖先看題。這幅圖表的標(biāo)題告訴我們，它反映的是2018 年至2020 年間我國(guó)快遞業(yè)務(wù)量的變化情況。我們?cè)俳Y(jié)合三組柱狀圖可以看出：從2018到2020 年，我國(guó)的快遞業(yè)務(wù)無(wú)論是總量還是在農(nóng)村地區(qū)均呈迅速增加的趨勢(shì)。

我們可以把這篇圖表作文寫(xiě)成三個(gè)段落。第一段完成寫(xiě)作指令中的第一項(xiàng)任務(wù)：interpret the chart。既然是解釋?zhuān)╥nterpret），就不能僅僅把圖表描述（describe）一番。因此我們?cè)陂_(kāi)始描述圖表之前，最好先用一句話概括出圖表的內(nèi)容，然后引用圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)作為支撐。我們?cè)诿枋鰣D表時(shí)要盡量選用意思具體的下義詞，還要注意措辭的變化。第二段完成寫(xiě)作指令中的第二項(xiàng)任務(wù)：give your comments，即對(duì)圖表中所反映的趨勢(shì)做出評(píng)論。我們一般從分析原因的角度展開(kāi)評(píng)論。就本文而言，我們可以分析中國(guó)快遞業(yè)務(wù)量迅速增加的原因。分析原因沒(méi)有標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案，因此考生可以根據(jù)自己的知識(shí)儲(chǔ)備自由發(fā)揮，只要能自圓其說(shuō)即可。比如，我們可以首先指出隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的興起，中國(guó)電子商務(wù)異軍突起，導(dǎo)致了快遞業(yè)務(wù)量迅速增加。其次，政府制定了各種優(yōu)惠的政策。比如，為了發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(jì)和促進(jìn)就業(yè)，各級(jí)政府出臺(tái)了很多激勵(lì)措施，如在農(nóng)村地區(qū)消除最后一公里快遞障礙等。這樣我們就從兩個(gè)方面解釋了中國(guó)的快遞業(yè)務(wù)量增加的原因。

本文的結(jié)尾段可以先總結(jié)全文，指出快遞業(yè)除了增加就業(yè)和方便人民的生活之外，還在促進(jìn)中國(guó)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展方面發(fā)揮了重要作用，然后建議政府采取適當(dāng)?shù)恼撸源_保快遞產(chǎn)業(yè)的健康發(fā)展。下面請(qǐng)看參考范文：

The bar graph above demonstrates the rapid growth in the express deliveryvolume in China from 2018 to 2020.The country had 51 billion parcels delivered through express delivery in 2018.This figure jumped to 83 billion in 2020.In the same period,the volume of express delivery in rural areas surged from 12 billion pieces to 30 billion.

Two factors are behind the boom in China’s express delivery industry.The first is the fast-developing e-commerce in China.With the rise of the Internet,online shopping has been growing by leaps and bounds,leading to the rapid growth in express delivery volume.Another factor at work is the favourable policies.To develop the economy and promote employment,governments at all levels took effective measures,such as breaking the“l(fā)ast mile”delivery barrier in rural areas,significantly boosting the business of couriers.

Apart from creating jobs and making things convenient for the people,express delivery services play an important role in promoting China’s economy.It is advised that the government implement appropriate policies to ensure the healthy development of the industry.(180 words)

語(yǔ)言亮點(diǎn)借鑒：

1.This figure jumped to 83 billion in 2020.這一數(shù)字在2020 年躍增到830億。jump to 躍增到。

2.Two factors are behind the boom in China’s express delivery industry.兩個(gè)因素造成中國(guó)快遞業(yè)的繁榮。behind 是……產(chǎn)生（或發(fā)展）的原因。boom （貿(mào)易和經(jīng)濟(jì)活動(dòng)的）繁榮。

3.With the rise of the Internet, online shopping has been growing by leaps and bounds, leading to the rapid growth in express delivery volume.隨著因特網(wǎng)的興起，網(wǎng)購(gòu)迅速發(fā)展，導(dǎo)致快遞量的迅速增長(zhǎng)。by leaps and bounds 非常迅速地（改善或增長(zhǎng)）。leading to … 是現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ)，表示結(jié)果。

4.Another factor at work is the favourable policies.另一個(gè)起作用的因素是優(yōu)惠的政策。at work 起作用。

5.It is advised that the government implement appropriate policies to ensure the healthy development of the industry.建議政府實(shí)行適當(dāng)?shù)恼?，以確保這一產(chǎn)業(yè)的健康發(fā)展。It is advised that 是一個(gè)提建議的常用句型，后面的從句用虛擬語(yǔ)氣，從句的謂語(yǔ)由should 加動(dòng)詞原形構(gòu)成，should 也可以省略。□