2022年高考熱門話題寫作預測（6）：做人與做事

四川 蔣建平

Part 1 激活·素養(yǎng)解讀

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Part 2 晨讀·素材積累

Ⅰ. 讀典題·知考向

一天，小韓在去拜訪朋友的路上看見一位受傷的婦女躺在地上，他毫不猶豫地打電話叫來了司機并送她去了醫(yī)院。 請以 “Should we help others in need?”為題發(fā)表自己的看法。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 事情的經(jīng)過；

2. 你的感想。

注意:

1. 詞數(shù)100 左右;

2.文章的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Should we help others in need?

Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture.

◆范文晨誦

Should we help others in need?

Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture.

One day, Xiao Han paid a visit to his friends. On his way he saw a woman lying on the street, for being hurt in the traffic accident.Although there is no denying that some tragic events turn out to be traps, he didn't hesitate,called the driver to stop right away and sent her to the hospital. Then he paid the treatment expenses by himself and tried to contact her family.

As the saying goes, helping hands are more sacred than praying lips. I truly believe we'd have a more harmonious society if everybody took action. What a fine deed!

◆模板提煉

觀點類作文一

The topic of ① ______________(主題) is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②______________(支持A 的理由一). What is more, ③______________理由二).Moreover,④_____________(理由三).

While others think that B is a better choice for the following three reasons. Firstly,⑤_____________(支持B 的理由一). Secondly(Besides), ⑥_____________(理由二). Thirdly(Finally), ⑦_____________(理由三).

From my point of view, I think⑧______________(我的觀點). The reason is that ⑨______________(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice.

觀點類作文二

There is a widespread concern over the issue that ____________（主題）. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that __________（觀點一）.

In their views there are two factors contributing to this attitude. In the first place,_____________（原 因 一）. Furthermore, in the second place, __________（原因二）. So it goes without saying that __________（觀點一）.

People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that_________（觀點二）. In their point of view, on the one hand, __________（原 因 一）. On the other hand,___________（原 因 二）. Therefore,there is no doubt that__________（觀點二）.

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __________(觀點一或二). It is not only because _______（原 因 一）, but also because _______（原因二）. The more ______，the more _________.（總結(jié)）

◆靚句積累

1. 不管事情有多枯燥，他都會全身心地去做所做之事，為我們樹立一個好榜樣。

（基礎(chǔ)表達）No matter how boring it is, he will devote himself to what he does and set a good example to us.

（高級表達）By being devoted to what he does, no matter how boring it is, he sets a good example to us.（by+V-ing 形式）

2. 他的人格魅力在于一個簡單的事實：對幫助別人他從不猶豫。

（基礎(chǔ)表達）He has charming personality,and facts show that he never hesitates to help others.

（高級表達）His charming personality lies in a simple fact that he never hesitates to help others.（同位語從句）

3. 他對所有人及自己所做的任何事情都嚴格要求，這讓他深受人們的愛戴。

（基礎(chǔ)表達）He is strict with everybody and in everything he does, so he is deeply loved and respected by people.

（高級表達）He is strict with everybody and in everything he does, which makes him deeply loved and respected.（which 引導非限制性定語從句）

4. 我真的很想采訪他，因為他不僅是第一個去太空的中國人，也是世界上最偉大的宇航員之一。

（基礎(chǔ)表達）I would really like to interview him because he is the first Chinese to go to space and one of the greatest astronauts in the world.

（高級表達）I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space, but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world.（not only..., but also...）

Ⅱ. 讀詞句·積語料

一、話題表達

核心詞匯：

1.observe v.觀察；監(jiān)視；慶祝；遵守；評論

observation n. 觀察

2. quality n. 品質(zhì)

3. thoughtful adj. 考慮周到的

thoughtfully adv. 沉思地；體貼地；親切地

4. mean adj. 小氣的

5. modest adj. 謙虛的；謙遜的

modesty n. 謙遜

6. plain adj. 樸素的；簡單的

plainly adv. 明白地；坦率地

7. virtue n. 美德；正直的品性

8. moral adj. 道德的；道義上的n. 品行；道德；寓意

9. precious adj. 珍稀的；寶貴的

10. seize v. 抓住(時機等)

11. satisfied adj. 滿意的

satisfaction n. 滿意

12. dependable adj. 可信賴的；可信任的

dependability n. 可靠性；可信任

13.concerned adj. 憂慮的；關(guān)注的

14. inspire v. 鼓勵

15. tend v. 照顧；照料；傾向；趨于

16. eager adj. 渴望的

eagerly adv. 熱切地；渴望地

17. assist v. 幫助；援助

assistance n. 幫助；援助；支持

assistant n. 助手；助理

18. energy n. 活力；精力；能源；能量

energetic adj. 精力充沛的；充滿活力的

高頻短語：

1. can not help doing sth 情不自禁地做某事

2. carry sb through sth 幫助某人渡過難關(guān)

3. assist sb in/with sth 在某事上幫助某人

4. assist sb in doing sth 幫助某人做某事

5. assist sb to do sth 幫助某人做某事

6. come to one's assistance 前來援助

7. be delighted to do sth 高興地做某事

8. long for sb to do sth 渴望某人做某事

9. crowd in (想法、問題等)涌入腦海

10. focus/concentrate on 集中于

11. have an optimistic attitude towards 對……有樂觀的態(tài)度

12. be touched/moved to tears 感動得流淚

13. have a strong desire to do sth 對做某事有強烈的愿望

14. with a smile on one's face 面帶笑容

提分靚句：

1. be thankful for+名詞

I am thankful for all of those who said NO to me. It's because of them (that) I'm doing it myself. 我感謝所有對我說不的人， 因為他們，我獨立做了一些事。 (Albert Einstein)

2. who 引導表語從句

You are essentially who you create yourself to be and all that occurs in your life is the result of your own making. 從本質(zhì)上來說， 你就是你自己所塑造的人，你生命中發(fā)生的一切都是你自己創(chuàng)造的結(jié)果。 (Stephen Richards)

3. enable sb to do sth 使得某人能夠做某事

I believe the practice of self-awareness is one of the greatest skills in life because it enables you to learn about yourself in a way no one else can ever teach you. 我相信自我意識的實踐是生活中最偉大的技能之一，因為它能夠使你以別人無法教你的方式了解自己。

4. be presented with+名詞 被授予……

Life is a journey, filled with ups and downs. With each challenge, each hurdle, we are presented with an opportunity to grow as a person. 人生是一段充滿坎坷的旅程。伴隨著每一次挑戰(zhàn)、每一個障礙，我們都有機會成長為人。

5. so long as 只要

Nothing seems terrible as long as we have a strong will and a brave heart. 只要有堅強的意志和勇敢的心，沒什么可怕的。

6. a look into+名詞 調(diào)查；窺探

These words of Dr Lin Qiaozhi give us a look into the heart of this amazing woman, and what carried her through a life of hard choices.從林巧稚醫(yī)生的這番話中，我們可以看到這位偉大女性的內(nèi)心世界，以及到底是什么支撐著她走過充滿艱難抉擇的一生。

7. 現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語

Though Lin Qiaozhi never married, she was known as the “mother of ten thousand babies”,having delivered over 50,000 babies in her lifetime. 雖然林巧稚終身未婚， 但是她被稱為“萬嬰之母”，她一生中親手接生的嬰兒有五萬多名。

8. “否定詞+比較級+than”表達肯定

As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates. 作為學生， 我可以告訴你，沒有任何事情比得上在同學面前受到老師的表揚。

9. since 引導狀語從句

Since it is unlikely to avoid failure in the process of achieving success, we should have the right attitude towards it. 既然在獲得成功的過程中不可能避免失敗，我們就應(yīng)該對失敗有正確的態(tài)度。

二、續(xù)寫金庫

動作描寫

1. She hugged them to her chest, and at last she was able to look up with tearful eyes and a smile. 她把它們緊緊地抱在胸前， 終于抬起頭來，淚流滿面地微笑著。

2. He gave a jump in the air, twirled, ran a few steps, stopped, looked all around, sniffed the smells of afternoon, and then set off walking down through the orchard. 他先是蹦跶了一下，原地轉(zhuǎn)了幾圈，再跑上幾步，又停了下來，四下望了望，嗅了嗅午后空氣的味道，然后一路跑進了果園。

3. Alice started to her feet, for it flashed across her mind that she had never before seen such a rabbit, and burning with curiosity, she ran across the field after it. 愛麗絲跳了起來，因為她突然想到她從來沒見過這樣的兔子。她好奇地穿過田野，追趕那只兔子。

4. We got into his car and drove up the road, stopped a few houses down from the tree.我們上了車，開上道路，然后停在了離這棵樹有些距離的地方。

5. Abel was quick. Good Lord, he was fast.The ringleader had made a dash for it, trying to climb over a hall. Abel grabbed him, pulled him down and dragged him back. 埃布爾跑得很快。天啊！這個元兇往前沖，試圖翻爬過大廳。但是埃布爾抓住他，把他拉下來并且拖了回去。

6. I ran back home, smiling and skipping along. 我蹦蹦跳跳地笑著跑回家。

Part 3 晚練·素養(yǎng)檢測

當今社會有人想助人為樂卻又有所顧慮。請你給校英文報寫一封信，講述你的同學李華在放學途中幫助一位摔傷老人的事情。要點如下：

1. 事情的經(jīng)過；

2. 你的感想。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)80 左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Editor,

Nowadays, some people are reportedly unwilling to help others._____________________

Yours,

Reader