話題寫作：周圍的環(huán)境

安徽泗縣一中 吳安運(yùn)

◎話題解讀

周圍環(huán)境包括我們學(xué)習(xí)、生活、工作和娛樂的場(chǎng)所， 因此該話題的寫作與我們的生活、學(xué)習(xí)息息相關(guān)。體裁以應(yīng)用文為主。例如：寫信或?qū)戉]件介紹某地環(huán)境狀況或變化；寫便條告知活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)；寫日記記錄自己的行程；向游客介紹旅游景點(diǎn)等。有時(shí)也可能出現(xiàn)說明文和記敘文。

高考命題者可能會(huì)從以下角度來命題：

1.向外賓介紹你就讀的學(xué)校、你所在的年級(jí)或班級(jí)情況，學(xué)校的圖書館、閱覽室、植物園、電腦室、實(shí)驗(yàn)室、體育館等。

2.讓考生以主人的身份向前來做客的外籍朋友介紹自家房子的方位和室內(nèi)情況等。

3.對(duì)公園、電影院、劇院、文化廣場(chǎng)、少年宮等進(jìn)行介紹。

4.對(duì)公共圖書館、電子圖書館、書店、歷史博物館等進(jìn)行介紹，內(nèi)容包括建館時(shí)間、開放時(shí)間、展出內(nèi)容、教育意義和公眾的反應(yīng)等。

5.就某一著名景點(diǎn)的方位、大小、歷史變遷、特色等進(jìn)行介紹并發(fā)表看法。

6.簡(jiǎn)述過去和現(xiàn)在人們居住的房屋及設(shè)施的變化并發(fā)表看法。

7.寫一篇參觀某名勝古跡或歷史博物館等的日記并發(fā)表自己的看法。

◎?qū)懽髂０?/h2>

My hometown lies in ________, which is famous for ________.In the south/north/west/east of ________.There are many ________,and I think you will love it.Great changes have taken place in ________in the past few years.________have been built connecting _________.________have been greatly improved and ________much better than before.If you come to ________, the people in my hometown will give you a warm welcome!→陳述地理位置→家鄉(xiāng)面貌→近幾年具體變化→發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)

模板范文

My hometown lies in a mountainous area, and to the north of it is a high mountain which is famous for its green plants.In the south of our village runs a small river, in which the water is so clean that we can see the reflected houses and green trees.There are many old houses as well as some modern buildings in our village.

Great changes have taken place in our hometown in the past few years.Many roads have been built connecting our village with other villages and cities.People's living standards have been greatly improved.If you come to my hometown, the people in my hometown will give you a warm welcome!

◎話題積累

Located/Situated/Seated in/on/to the...is...坐落在某處的是……

...is located/situated in/on/to the east/west/south/north.……坐落在某地的東/西/南/北方。

...is/lies in/on/to the east/west/south/north of the...……地處……的東/西/南/北方。

On/In/To the east/west/south/north of...is/lies...在……的東/西/南/北方坐落著……

Behind the street lies a small river.街道后面有一條小河。

On the top of the mountain stands a 50-meter-high tower.山頂上矗立著一座50米高的塔。

There is/stands/lies...in/on/to...……有/坐落著……

There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom.臥室里有一張床、一張沙發(fā)、一張桌子和一把椅子。

Go down/up/on/along the...till you get to...沿……路走下去，直到你到達(dá)……

Go on/through...and you will get to/see...沿……走/穿過……，你就能看到……

Take...and turn right/left at the first/second turning.走……路在第一/二個(gè)拐角處朝右/左拐。

It is about 5 minutes' walk/ride/drive away from here.步行/騎車/開車大約5分鐘的路程。

A beautiful view greets us.美麗的景色呈現(xiàn)在我們面前。

Everyone is very mad about the fine view of...每個(gè)人都非常迷戀……的優(yōu)美風(fēng)光。

Because of the beautiful scenery and memories, I like going back to my hometown in summer.正是因?yàn)檫@些美麗的風(fēng)景和回憶，我喜歡在夏天回到故鄉(xiāng)。

Now, my hometown has developed into a big and rich town.現(xiàn)在，我的家鄉(xiāng)已經(jīng)變成了一個(gè)富裕的大城鎮(zhèn)。

◎經(jīng)典考題

廣州某電臺(tái)英文頻道將開設(shè)“Welcome to Guangzhou” 欄目， 目前面向全市中學(xué)生征集“微廣州”英文介紹。請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，向該欄目投稿。短文需包括下圖所有提示內(nèi)容。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time.

If you want to find an ideal place,Guangzhou is just the very place to be.

【寫作導(dǎo)引】

1.審題立意

本文是圖表提綱式說明文體裁。題目要求考生用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文， 給廣州某電臺(tái)“Welcome to Guangzhou”欄目投稿，簡(jiǎn)要介紹廣州。家鄉(xiāng)這個(gè)話題對(duì)于考生而言應(yīng)該是很溫馨的，無形之中就給考生提供了充分的話題準(zhǔn)備，既讓考生有話可說，又給考生發(fā)揮的余地，充分體現(xiàn)了新課改理念。另外，圖示中給了很多的要點(diǎn)提示，因此考生在寫作時(shí)要盡量避免過度發(fā)揮導(dǎo)致文章冗長(zhǎng)拖沓。要將寫作重點(diǎn)放在內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的整合和措辭方面。這樣，寫出的短文就能有聲有色，文采斐然。

2.寫作要點(diǎn)

3.注意事項(xiàng)

（1）考生應(yīng)注意對(duì)所給信息加以整合，必須包括圖表提示的全部?jī)?nèi)容； 結(jié)合題目要求，還要進(jìn)行必要的拓展。

（2）在寫作時(shí)，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。

（3）注意多種句式交錯(cuò)使用，語(yǔ)義要通順，邏輯要合理，同時(shí)還要注意適當(dāng)使用銜接詞語(yǔ)。

【佳作賞析】

Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure tohave a good time.Guangzhou is a seaside city in Guangdong Province, which is in the south of China①.The climate there is warm throughout the year②.It's a good destination for travelers.

Guangzhou also has a history of over 2,000 years.It's one of the earliest cities to be forced to open up to the west foreign countries after the Drug War.Guangzhou has a lot of places of interest, among which is Guangzhou Tower③.You can overlook the whole view of Guangzhou on the top of it.In addition, there are many tasty foods in Guangzhou.

If you want to find an ideal place,Guangzhou is just the very place to be.

亮點(diǎn)分析：本篇習(xí)作對(duì)題目要求中所給的全部信息進(jìn)行了有效的整合，不但準(zhǔn)確地完成了題目所規(guī)定的寫作內(nèi)容， 而且整體布局合理，能夠做到上下文自然銜接和過渡。文章表達(dá)方式豐富多彩，措辭恰當(dāng)，理應(yīng)是一篇值得我們反復(fù)誦讀的考場(chǎng)高分佳作。

①which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句， 清楚地表達(dá)了所給材料，豐富了句式。

②高級(jí)詞匯throughout的使用在很大程度上彰顯了作者較強(qiáng)的遣詞造句能力。

③“介詞+which”引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句屬于英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法的一個(gè)難點(diǎn)，是一個(gè)難得的佳句。

◎小試牛刀

你的美國(guó)朋友John計(jì)劃暑假來中國(guó)旅游。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖示，用英語(yǔ)在QQ中給他留言，介紹并推薦你的家鄉(xiāng)福建，詞數(shù)100左右。

要求：

1.必須包含所有提示信息，開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范。

Hi, John, I'm glad to hear that you're planning to travel around China during the summer vacation.I'd like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit.

Fujian lies

I'm looking forward to meeting you!