旅游交通

吳安運(yùn)

◎文體概述

本話題主要涉及旅游、詢問與預(yù)訂、交通方式、指路與問路、安全條例與警告等。針對(duì)本話題，高考命題人員可能會(huì)從以下幾種角度來命題：

1. 旅游計(jì)劃的擬訂、旅游準(zhǔn)備及注意事項(xiàng);

2. 酒店、景點(diǎn)等的預(yù)訂及費(fèi)用;

3. 國外旅游注意事項(xiàng);

4. 太空旅游、生態(tài)旅游;

5. 護(hù)照、簽證的申辦及其費(fèi)用;

6. 度假方式的變化及其原因;

7. 描述旅游經(jīng)歷;

8. 問路與指路;

9. 私家車激增的利與弊;

10. 交通方式的變化及其對(duì)人們生活的影響;

11. 交通安全。

◎?qū)懽髂０?/p>

It is exciting to visit different places. As you travel， you will see

_______. Besides， you can _______ . Finally， you can _______ .

People travel for various reasons. Some travel for pleasure. Some ________. And others .

Traveling makes an open man. You may ________.

模板范文

It is exciting to visit different places. As you travel， you will see beautiful scenery， meet and make friends with different people and understand the customs of the local people.

People travel for various reasons. Some travel for pleasure. Some travel to enjoy more delicious foods. And others travel for a broader horizon.

Traveling makes an open man. You may have read or heard about something， but you can never get an accurate picture of it until you see it by yourself. If you want to enrich your life， how I hope you can travel with me.

◎經(jīng)典句型

1. I think the train is much safer than the airplane. 我覺得火車比飛機(jī)安全多了。

2. It is the first time for me to come to Beijing. 這是我第一次來北京。

3. With a long history， Beijing is rich in tourist attractions. 北京歷史悠久，名勝古跡眾多。

4. The scenery is charming！ 這里景色迷人！

5. Great changes have taken place in the ways that people spend their holidays over the period from the year 1998 to 2018. 在1998年至

2018年間，人們的度假方式已經(jīng)發(fā)生了巨大的變化。

6. The best time to visit Hainan is between November and March. 來海南游玩的最佳時(shí)間是在11月至3月。

7. They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams. 他們說大量的游

客涌到動(dòng)物園會(huì)導(dǎo)致交通阻塞。

8. However， others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. 然而，其他人喜歡出去旅游，是因?yàn)檫@既可以增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)，又可以開闊視野。

9. Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest， such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. 四川省旅游資源豐富，有許多世界著名的風(fēng)景名勝，如九寨溝、都江堰水利工程。

10. Besides， the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable. 此外，這里的好天氣以及便利的交通會(huì)讓你的旅行更加愉悅。

11. At 7：00 on the morning of October 1， well visit the Great Wall. 10月1號(hào)上午7點(diǎn)我們將游覽長(zhǎng)城。

12. What's more， riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. 更為重要的是，騎自行車對(duì)我們來說是一種很好的鍛煉，同時(shí)也對(duì)我們的健康有利。

13. As is known to all， with the improvement of our living standards， cars have become a popular means of transport， bringing great convenience to our life. 眾所周知，隨著我們生活水平的提高，小汽車變成一種受歡迎的交通工具，給我們的生活帶來很大的便利。

◎典題鏈接

你的英國朋友Jim所在的學(xué)校要組織學(xué)生來中國旅行，有兩條線路可以選擇：“長(zhǎng)江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim來信希望你能給些建議。請(qǐng)你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 你建議的線路;

2. 你的理由;

3. 你的祝愿。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jim，

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Yours，

Li Hua

【試題解讀】

1. 審題立意

該篇書面表達(dá)采用的是應(yīng)用文的考查形式，寫作任務(wù)要求考生根據(jù)提示寫一封回信。從測(cè)試內(nèi)容上來看，回信的主題與旅游有關(guān)，所供選路線均為中國著名景點(diǎn)，一方面提醒考生要走進(jìn)大自然、享受自然之美，另一方面也教育學(xué)生熱愛祖國。

從提示上來看，題干所提供的兩條路線沒有給出具體的內(nèi)容，試題的寫作要點(diǎn)也沒有給出具體的細(xì)節(jié)，而只是寬泛的提示，所以具有很大的開放性，這要求考生結(jié)合自己對(duì)長(zhǎng)江或泰山的了解羅列出有用的寫作素材來合理組織寫作。因此，該寫作任務(wù)提醒考生寫作的靈感往往來源于生活，所以我們平時(shí)應(yīng)多關(guān)注生活，在生活中不斷積累寫作素材，這樣才不至于在寫作中無話可說。因試題已經(jīng)給出了書信的格式，所以考生不必考慮和擔(dān)心書信格式的正確與否，可以直接根據(jù)自己的寫作安排展開寫作。

2. 寫作要點(diǎn)

（1）信件開頭簡(jiǎn)短的寒暄和導(dǎo)入;

（2）推薦路線：長(zhǎng)江之行或泰山之旅;

（3）說明為對(duì)方推薦該路線的理由;

（4）祝對(duì)方旅游愉快。

3. 注意事項(xiàng)

（1）路線選擇應(yīng)以自己對(duì)該路線有較好的了解為基礎(chǔ);

（2）所給出的理由應(yīng)具有說服力。

【佳作賞析1】

Dear Jim，

Hearing that youll visit China， I advise you to have a trip to Mount Tai. ①

Mount Tai， which is crowned the most famous of China's five great mountains②， attracts millions of tourists every year. It has a long history and has witnessed the changes of Chinese old civilization. Although climbing it is not that easy， you can build up your body. ③ In the meanwhile④， the beautiful spots are sure to attract you all the way.

Therefore， choosing to travel to Mount Tai is a good choice.⑤ I hope that you can have a good time in China.

Yours，

Li Hua

亮點(diǎn)分析：本篇習(xí)作語言樸實(shí)自然，符合書信的寫作特點(diǎn)。文章語言十分簡(jiǎn)潔，但含有豐富的內(nèi)容。推薦對(duì)方登泰山的原因介紹為文章寫作重點(diǎn)，筆墨頗多，讓讀者對(duì)泰山有深入的了解，很好地達(dá)到了寫作的目的。文中crown、 witness等高級(jí)詞匯的使用體現(xiàn)了考生豐富的詞匯知識(shí)。in the meanwhile、 therefore等過渡詞的使用更是讓文章渾然一體，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊?？傊?，該篇習(xí)作很好地完成了寫作任務(wù)，理應(yīng)為一篇高考滿分作文。

①文章開頭不拖泥帶水，直入主題。其中Hearing that youll visit China為現(xiàn)在分詞短語，在句中作狀語。

②這是一個(gè)非限制性定語從句，其中使用了crown這一高級(jí)詞匯，說明泰山的名氣，增加了說服力。

③這是一個(gè)由although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，該句說明了建議對(duì)方登泰山的理由。

④此處In the meanwhile用作過渡詞，該過渡詞使用貼切，并很自然地引出了登泰山的另一個(gè)理由。

⑤該句以therefore對(duì)上文作出總結(jié)，該句中的choosing to travel to Mount Tai為動(dòng)名詞作主語。

【佳作賞析2】

Dear Jim，

Im glad to hear that youre paying a visit to China. As for your travel route， Id like to recommend that you? have a trip along the Changjiang River.①

As we all know， the Changjiang River is a symbol of China and it is the longest river in China， representing the long history of China.② Therefore， not only can you appreciate the beautiful scenery but you can also have a good knowledge of Chinese culture in the trip.③ Besides， because the river runs through ten provinces and cities， you can taste various Chinese delicious foods.④

I hope that you can have a wonderful time in China.⑤

Yours，

Li Hua

亮點(diǎn)分析：本篇習(xí)作考生向?qū)Ψ酵扑]長(zhǎng)江之行，文章所給理由充分，即說明了可以欣賞美景，了解中國文化，還可以品嘗中華美食。文章內(nèi)容豐富，行文流暢，結(jié)構(gòu)明晰。全文多處使用復(fù)雜句，分詞作狀語、主從復(fù)合句、虛擬語氣等，這都體現(xiàn)了考生較全面的語法知識(shí)，而represent、have a good knowledge of、various等高級(jí)詞匯的使用也體現(xiàn)出考生扎實(shí)的語言功底。

①在recommend后是一個(gè)賓語從句，該從句用（should）do這一虛擬語氣結(jié)構(gòu)。

②該句中的as we all know引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，representing為現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語。

③這是一個(gè)not only...but also...結(jié)構(gòu)，not

only放在主語前，句子使用了部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)。

④此處because引導(dǎo)一個(gè)原因狀語從句，該句說出了進(jìn)行長(zhǎng)江之行的又一理由。

⑤文章最后用簡(jiǎn)潔的語言表達(dá)了考生的祝愿。

參考范文

Dear Jim，

From your last letter， I've known that you'll visit China. I'd prefer to recommend that you climb Mount Tai， which is located in Shandong Province.

Mount Tai has an altitude of 1，545 meters. There are more than 6，000 steps to climb if you want to get to the top of it. Consequently， climbing Mount Tai is really a challenge. How'ever， you can test your perseverance by climbing it. At the same time， the beautiful scenery will surely leave you a deep impression.

I hope you can have a great time in China.

Yours，

Li Hua

◎小試牛刀

假定你是李華，計(jì)劃組織一次郊游，請(qǐng)給你的英國朋友Chris寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 參加者;

2. 時(shí)間、地點(diǎn);

3. 活動(dòng)：登山、野餐等。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Chris，

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Yours，

Li Hua