學(xué)校生活與課外活動(dòng)

安徽宿州市泗縣一中 吳安運(yùn)

◎文體概述

學(xué)校生活涉及在校學(xué)習(xí)的課程和學(xué)校、班級(jí)或?qū)W生會(huì)等舉行的各項(xiàng)比賽或課外活動(dòng)，如聚會(huì)、野餐、燒烤、春游等；還包括學(xué)生的穿著、發(fā)型、預(yù)習(xí)、復(fù)習(xí)、討論、歸納等學(xué)習(xí)活動(dòng)及教師的教學(xué)方法等。高考作文可能會(huì)從以下角度命題：

1.就學(xué)生的穿著、發(fā)型、行為舉止等發(fā)表看法。

2.就預(yù)習(xí)、復(fù)習(xí)、討論、歸納等課堂學(xué)習(xí)活動(dòng)和教師教學(xué)方法等發(fā)表看法。

3.就任課教師開展評(píng)教活動(dòng)發(fā)表看法。

4.就學(xué)校在節(jié)假日該不該補(bǔ)課發(fā)表看法。

5.就學(xué)生該不該參加課外各種形式的訓(xùn)練，如鋼琴培訓(xùn)、外語(yǔ)培訓(xùn)、勤工儉學(xué)等發(fā)表看法。

體裁以應(yīng)用文為主，如可能會(huì)要求考生就某項(xiàng)比賽寫一份通知，或就聚會(huì)、野餐、燒烤、春游等課外活動(dòng)寫活動(dòng)安排或日記。

◎?qū)懽髂０?/h2>

I'm a student.I study in __________.I have a wonderful school life.Now let me tell you something about my school life.I get up at about_____________every weekday.I have breakfast at___________ .My classes begin at___________.After classes,.I always have lunch __________.After school, .I go to library __________.On Saturday and Sunday, __________.How do you like my school life?Could you tell me something about yours?→綜述→日常活動(dòng)→詢問(wèn)對(duì)方情況

模板范文

I'm a student.I study in Beijing No.4 Senior High School.I have a wonderful school life.Now let me tell you something about my school life.

I get up at about 6:30 every weekday.I have breakfast at 7:00.My classes begin at 7:20.After classes,I play games with my classmates.I always have lunch at home with my parents.After school,I often play basketball or football with my friends.I go to library every Tuesday and Friday.On Saturday and Sunday,I often study the piano.

How do you like my school life?Could you tell me something about yours?

◎經(jīng)典句型

1.Recently we have had a heated discussion as to whether we should have term exams.最近，我們就是否應(yīng)該進(jìn)行學(xué)期考試進(jìn)行了激烈的討論。

2.The extracurricular activity is a necessary part of the school life.課外活動(dòng)是學(xué)校生活不可缺少的一部分。

3.There are varieties of out-of-class activities in our school,which we can take part in after class.我們學(xué)校有多種多樣的課外活動(dòng)，我們課后可以參加。

4.The meeting will be held on the first floor of the school library and last ten days,from June 10th to 20th.這次會(huì)議將于6月10日至20日在學(xué)校圖書館一樓舉行，為期十天。

5.As a student,I am strongly for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful.作為一名學(xué)生，我堅(jiān)決支持這次活動(dòng)，因?yàn)樗扔幸饬x又有用。

6.Only by reading widely can we gain more knowledge and broaden our horizons.只有博覽群書我們才能增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)，開闊視野。

7.We should take/seize every possible opportunity to acquire more useful knowledge and get fully developed.我們應(yīng)抓住一切可以利用的機(jī)會(huì)去獲取更多的知識(shí)并得到全面的發(fā)展。

8.Not only did it improve their spoken English,but also it brought them much fun.這不僅提高了他們的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)，也給他們帶來(lái)了許多樂(lè)趣。

9.We gathered at the school gate and started out at seven o'clock.We got a warm welcome on/upon our arrival.我們?cè)谛ｉT口集合，7點(diǎn)出發(fā)。一到那兒，我們就受到了熱烈的歡迎。

10.A child poor at math may be talented in painting.一個(gè)數(shù)學(xué)差的小孩兒可能是繪畫天才。

11.I prefer to fail rather than cheat in the exam.我寧愿考不及格，也不愿意考試作弊。

12.I'm determined to do well in my lessons so as not to let my parents down.為了不讓我的父母失望，我決心把功課學(xué)好。

13.A large number of students find that after long hours of study,they can relax both physically and mentally by taking part in school activities.許多學(xué)生發(fā)現(xiàn)參加學(xué)?；顒?dòng)可以使他們?cè)陂L(zhǎng)時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)之后放松身心。

14.We students of Senior Three are called on to give away our used books,newspapers or magazines to the students in the lower grades.我們高三的學(xué)生們被號(hào)召把我們用過(guò)的書、報(bào)紙及雜志贈(zèng)送給低年級(jí)的同學(xué)們。

15.As for me,we have benefited a lot from this activity,not only broadening our horizons,but also developing our interest in science.依我看，我們?cè)谶@次活動(dòng)中收獲很大，它不僅開闊了我們的視野，而且培養(yǎng)了我們對(duì)科學(xué)的興趣。

16.So far we have conducted/carried out a variety of activities on English learning,such as watching English films,holding a Christmas party and getting together with foreign students.迄今為止，關(guān)于英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)我們已經(jīng)開展了多種多樣的活動(dòng)，如觀看英文電影、舉行圣誕晚會(huì)以及與外國(guó)學(xué)生聚會(huì)等。

◎典題鏈接

（2019屆安徽省江南名校高三大聯(lián)考）假定你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班學(xué)生李華，你校將在下周五舉辦 “校園文化節(jié) （Campus Culture Festival）”系列活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)給你班留學(xué)生Jim寫封郵件，邀請(qǐng)他參加。郵件的內(nèi)容包括：

1.介紹你選擇的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；

2.說(shuō)明參加該活動(dòng)的理由；

3.詢問(wèn)是否愿意參加該活動(dòng)。注意：

1.詞數(shù)不少于100；

2.郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jim,

I'm writing to inform you of the annual event called “Campus Culture Festival” in our school.

Yours,

Li Hua

【試題解讀】

1.審題立意

該篇書面表達(dá)以書信體裁作為考查方式。書信體裁是學(xué)生常見的一種書面表達(dá)形式。從內(nèi)容上看，本文要求考生根據(jù)題目要求寫封邀請(qǐng)信，邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方來(lái)學(xué)校參加“校園文化節(jié)”。但題目并沒(méi)有給出具體的活動(dòng)，這是本篇習(xí)作的一個(gè)難點(diǎn)，同時(shí)也是重點(diǎn)所在。這要求學(xué)生在寫作前認(rèn)真審題，做到心中有數(shù)，知道要寫什么，怎么寫，怎樣才能寫好。

認(rèn)真審題之后，我們就要擬定一個(gè)自己選擇的活動(dòng)，這是全文的核心。這個(gè)活動(dòng)的選擇是我們自己想象出來(lái)的，我們可以根據(jù)自己的愛(ài)好，同時(shí)抓住文化這一主線挑選出這樣的一個(gè)活動(dòng)來(lái)。然后，敘述自己挑選它的緣由。最后詢問(wèn)對(duì)方是否感興趣，并邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方參加。這是全文的主要脈絡(luò)，但要寫得出色，必須在結(jié)構(gòu)上、內(nèi)容上多下功夫。為了提高書面表達(dá)的得分檔次，學(xué)生在寫作時(shí)也要注意自己的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)，可以使用一些長(zhǎng)短句和必要的過(guò)渡詞，使文章銜接自然。

2.寫作要點(diǎn)

（1）介紹活動(dòng)的大體情況；

（2）你所選擇的活動(dòng)；

（3）闡述選擇該活動(dòng)的理由；

（4）誠(chéng)邀對(duì)方參加。

3.注意事項(xiàng)

（1）側(cè)重所選擇的活動(dòng)及理由這一主要方面；

（2）主次分明，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練，脈絡(luò)清晰。

【佳作賞析1】

Dear Jim,

I am writing to inform you of the annual event called “Campus Culture Festival” in our school.You can experience interesting activities here.

As a member of Environmental Protection Association in our school,I will choose the activity where we collect the trash and use it to create some practical gadget like vases and baskets.①After that,we will display our works.As far as I am concerned,it is of great significance and benefit.②Not only can it dig out the hidden value of the used things and rubbish,but also it can make us students pay more attention to the effects of what we produce in daily life.③

Are you curious about the festival?It will be really great if you can come and join us.

Yours,

Li Hua

亮點(diǎn)分析：全文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，過(guò)渡自然，語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用富于變化，顯得老練嫻熟。此外，作者還非常熟練地使用了倒裝語(yǔ)序和be+of+n.等諸多高級(jí)句式和結(jié)構(gòu)，為文章內(nèi)容的充實(shí)提供了保障和基石。特別是利用垃圾轉(zhuǎn)廢為寶的這種環(huán)保理念非常值得稱道，也為我們上了一節(jié)環(huán)境保護(hù)、利用資源和節(jié)約資源的教育課?？傊?，這是一篇優(yōu)秀的習(xí)作。

①這是一個(gè)長(zhǎng)句，后一分句中使用了where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，修飾the activity，運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確。

②這里作者使用了be+of+n.的高級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)，表明該活動(dòng)非常有意義。

③not only置于句首時(shí)，其后需部分倒裝。這里作者使用得精準(zhǔn)，且語(yǔ)句內(nèi)容豐富，是全文的一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)句。

【佳作賞析2】

Dear Jim,

I am writin g to inform you of the annual event called “Campus Culture Festival”in our school.It is very popular with us students.①

It's to be held next week,and then you will experience various kinds of activities from papercutting to making sweet dumplings.②This year,as a crazy fan of Chinese classical music,I will go in for the show of a classical concert,from which I definitely will enjoy a lot.③As you know,it's music that sometimes makes us relaxed and reduces our pressure and worries.④In addition,there will be an exhibition of different kinds of Chinese classical instruments,such as zheng,drum,flute and so on.

I have no idea whether you are interested in it,if so,please let me know.⑤Looking for your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

亮點(diǎn)分析：本文開門見山表達(dá)了寫信目的，點(diǎn)明主題——邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方參加“校園文化節(jié)”。寫作內(nèi)容豐富，作者嚴(yán)格按照寫作要求，布局謀篇合理，語(yǔ)言組織精密。文中多個(gè)復(fù)雜句式的使用體現(xiàn)出作者扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言功底。此外，be popular with、various、definitely等詞匯的精準(zhǔn)使用，使文章亮點(diǎn)頗多，讀之有味。

①此句開門見山，直接表明寫信的目的——邀請(qǐng)Jim參加“校園文化節(jié)”活動(dòng)，這是書信體裁較為常見的一種開篇方式。

②這是一個(gè)由and連接的并列句，其中前一分句中be to do是將來(lái)時(shí)的一種表達(dá)方式，活動(dòng)被舉辦屬被動(dòng)，故作者用to be done；后一分句中from...to...列舉了豐富的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容。

小貼士此句還可以這樣表達(dá)：

It is going to take place next week,and then you will experience different kinds of activitiesfrom paper-cutting to making sweet dumplings.

It is going to be held next week,and then you will experience a variety of activities from paper-cutting to making sweet dumplings.

③介詞from和關(guān)系代詞which構(gòu)成的定語(yǔ)從句在這里運(yùn)用得自然地道。

④本句含有It is...that強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，強(qiáng)調(diào)音樂(lè)的重要性和好處。該句式的正確使用體現(xiàn)出作者較好的語(yǔ)法功底。

⑤這是一個(gè)主從復(fù)合句，其中從句部分為省略表達(dá)if so,該結(jié)構(gòu)看似簡(jiǎn)單，但能熟練運(yùn)用則體現(xiàn)了作者英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用地嫻熟。

●標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文

Dear Jim,

I am writing to inform you of the annual event called “Campus Culture Festival” in our school.

This year the festival will provide various activities.As a lover of traditional culture,I'd like to choose kite-flying.There will be pictures,poems and proverbs about kites when the time comes.We will also have the chance to learn how to make kites from folk artists.Besides,a competition for kite-flying will be held.I'm sure we'll develop our awareness of traditional culture and practical ability during this activity.

If you are interested in it,please let me know.Hope to meet you at the Campus Culture Festival.

Yours,

Li Hua

◎小試牛刀

假定你是李華，計(jì)劃和同學(xué)去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人們過(guò)重陽(yáng)節(jié)（the Double Ninth Festival）。請(qǐng)給外教露西寫封郵件，邀她一同前往，內(nèi)容包括：

1.出發(fā)及返回時(shí)間；

2.活動(dòng)：包餃子、表演節(jié)目等。注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua