巧用被動(dòng)語態(tài)，提升書面表達(dá)

四川付利

被動(dòng)語態(tài)是英語中一個(gè)很重要的語法點(diǎn)，是地道英語的一種重要表達(dá)方式。認(rèn)識(shí)、掌握并恰當(dāng)使用被動(dòng)語態(tài)，在高考書面表達(dá)中有著重大的意義。

Step 1真題感知

1.（2020·全國(guó)甲卷）

Last weekend,my classmates and I participated in a picking activity on the Dongshan Farm,which turned out to be meaningful and unforgettable.

Founded in the 1950s,the farm is famous and attractive,covered with a variety of fruits and colorful flowers.Many animals are raised there as well.We were divided into several groups in advance.Some filled in the baskets and others carried them to the truck.What a busy scene!We had a short break after lunch and then went on working until 5：00 pm.At about 6：30 pm,we all arrived home,exhausted but happy.

It's through this activity that I have realized how important teamwork is.I will benefit from this experience forever.2.（2019·全國(guó)丙卷）Dear Allen,

How's it going?I'm writing to invite you to take part in our coming Music Festival.

The Festival will be celebrated on June 16 in our school hall.As scheduled,it will begin at 9 am and go on to 12 am.If you're present,you will enjoy wonderful Chinese folk songs and Western music will be performed by our teachers and schoolmates.Since you're an expert in theatrical performances,we're happy to have you to sing and dance on the show.If you agree to come,your performances,together with other performances,will be put on the list to let the audience know ahead of time.

I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

以上都是從滿分范文中選取的代表作。在這兩篇文章中，被動(dòng)語態(tài)正確且恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂?，讓文章整體讀起來流暢、自然。

Step 2語法提點(diǎn)

語態(tài)分為主動(dòng)語態(tài)和被動(dòng)語態(tài)。主動(dòng)語態(tài)表示主語是謂語動(dòng)詞的實(shí)施者，被動(dòng)語態(tài)表示主語是謂語動(dòng)詞的承受者，以下主要講述語態(tài)中的被動(dòng)語態(tài)。

一、謂語動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語態(tài)

●結(jié)構(gòu)

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●用法舉例

1.用被動(dòng)語態(tài)將動(dòng)作的承受者作為要表達(dá)的中心。

The meeting has been rescheduled because of the outbreak of COVID-19.

Many of the school records were broken in school meeting held last week.

You have to choose another way because the road is still being repaired.2.為了禮貌起見，避免提到動(dòng)作的執(zhí)行者。

Little Tom had been warned again not to be late,but he didn't listen.

My salary hasn't been paid yet.3.為了變換句型，讓文章的表達(dá)豐富、生動(dòng)，避免單調(diào)、無聊，吸引讀者讀下去。

He put his laundry in the washing machine,and hurried to work,but when he came back,the laundry had been washed and hung on the balcony.It must have been done by his mother.At that time,his heart was filled with love and happiness.

4.為了讓上下文自然、流暢，豐富句型，增加可讀性。

Coca-Cola was invented by a pharmacist named John Pemberton,whose original recipe contained cocaine.That is why the drink was named Coca-Cola.Today,Coca-Cola is a global brand that is consumed by millions of people around the world.

5.提升文章表達(dá)。

You're welcome to be present at the yearly paper-cutting exhibition.It is often held on October 1st,running for a week.Thousands of visitors are attracted to the show every year,for they're more available during the National Day holiday to enjoy the big event.

二、非謂語動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語態(tài)

●結(jié)構(gòu)

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●用法舉例

1.用to be done表示將來要被進(jìn)行的動(dòng)作。

I'm writing to invite you to take part in the music show to be held next Saturday.

2.用having been done強(qiáng)調(diào)該動(dòng)作先于主句動(dòng)作，并對(duì)主句動(dòng)作造成一定的影響。

Having been introduced to Sichuan food many times,he decided to have a taste.

3.用being done表示正在被進(jìn)行的動(dòng)作。

How I wish you could go with me to the Science Expo being held at the Exhibition Center,where a variety of the latest cutting-edge technologies are being exhibited.I believe it would be an exciting experience.

4.用done表示已經(jīng)被完成的動(dòng)作。

Now,it's very convenient for passengers to collect tickets booked online.At the airport,the train station and the bus station,many printing machines are planted there,offering convenient ticket printing service.

Step 3單句過手

李老師在學(xué)生中備受尊敬，包括我。他戴著一副厚厚的眼鏡，眼里充滿了智慧和溫和，是一個(gè)真正的學(xué)者。

2.(2020·全國(guó)乙卷)Unfortunately,Iwhen my mind drifted away.

不幸的是，當(dāng)我走神的時(shí)候，我被邀請(qǐng)分享我的看法。

這部戲劇是依據(jù)我們英語課本上一個(gè)故事改編的。

4.(2019·全國(guó)乙卷)Having known a Chinese Painting Exhibitionby the local art gallery,I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer.

了解到當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館將舉辦中國(guó)畫展，我寫信來申請(qǐng)當(dāng)一名志愿者。

5.(2019·全國(guó)甲卷)I'm writing to tell you a piece of news that a volleyball gameon the playground this Friday afternoon.

我寫信來告訴你一個(gè)消息，這周五下午學(xué)校運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)將舉行一場(chǎng)排球比賽。

6.(2019·天津卷)Your earliest reply

非常感謝你的及早答復(fù)。

7.(2019·浙江卷)To my gratitude,your free timein helping me polish up my oral English.

讓我感激的是，你的業(yè)余時(shí)間都花在幫助提高我的英語口語上。

8.(2018·全國(guó)乙卷)Appropriate gifts強(qiáng)烈推薦帶上合適的禮物。

再怎么強(qiáng)調(diào)餐桌禮儀都不過分。

10.(2018·全國(guó)甲卷)An amazing English short movie about our schoolin the library.

一部關(guān)于我們學(xué)校的很棒的英語短片將在圖書館放映。

按照預(yù)期，它不僅會(huì)激發(fā)全體學(xué)生對(duì)學(xué)校的自豪之情，還會(huì)成為每個(gè)人努力學(xué)習(xí)的動(dòng)力。

12.(2018·全國(guó)甲卷)Every kind of feedback of the movie

屆時(shí)將鼓勵(lì)大家發(fā)表關(guān)于這部電影的各種反饋。

以上提到的電影簡(jiǎn)單總結(jié)了我們學(xué)校發(fā)生的變化。

14.(2018·全國(guó)甲卷)At the end of the show,youto make comments about the film.

放映結(jié)束時(shí)，你將被邀請(qǐng)對(duì)電影做點(diǎn)評(píng)。

15.(2018·北京卷)Peking Universityits language and culture coursefor international students.

北大因?qū)ｉT向國(guó)際學(xué)生提供語言和文化課程而出名。

16.(2018·江蘇卷)Nowadays,most commodities or servicesthrough certain channels.

如今，人們都是通過某些渠道來評(píng)價(jià)大部分商品和服務(wù)的。

17.(2018·江蘇卷)As we all know,most of the ratingsother customers'judgement on the products or service concerned.

眾所周知，大部分排名都是基于其他顧客對(duì)相關(guān)產(chǎn)品或者服務(wù)的評(píng)價(jià)的。

還有不容忽視的情況是，一些排名是一些公司或者賣家精心操作的結(jié)果。

19.(2018·全國(guó)丙卷)There is a brilliant stadium in my school,whichtwo years ago.,the stadium attracts a great many students after school.

我們學(xué)校有一座兩年前修建的漂亮的體育館。這座體育館設(shè)備非常齊全，吸引著很多學(xué)生課后來運(yùn)動(dòng)。

will learn about Tang Poetry,which reflects traditional Chinese culture andby Chinese people.

這堂課將在下周二下午3點(diǎn)到5點(diǎn)開課。你會(huì)了解到唐詩——反映中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化、深受中國(guó)人喜愛的詩歌。

21.(2017·全國(guó)甲卷)I'm writing to invite you to pay a visit to the Chinese paper-cutting exhibition_______________________by our school.

我寫信是為了邀請(qǐng)你參加將在我們學(xué)校舉辦的中國(guó)剪紙展。

22.(2017·全國(guó)甲卷)Not only will our school's paper-cutting club's works

but we will also have some valuable sets of paper-cutting

我們學(xué)校剪紙俱樂部的作品將被展出，而且我們還要展出由著名藝術(shù)家創(chuàng)作的剪紙作品。

23.(2016·全國(guó)乙卷)I'd be very grateful if you could spare some time to go through my résuméand make necessary changes in the material

如果你能抽些時(shí)間幫我仔細(xì)看看我的簡(jiǎn)歷，給附在這封信后面的材料做必要的修改，我將不勝感激。

24.(2013·重慶卷)Finless porpoises,a kind of rare and lovely animal,the danger of extinction.

江豚，一種可愛、稀有的動(dòng)物，面臨著滅絕的危險(xiǎn)。

25.(2017·全國(guó)乙卷)It's high time that immediate measures

是時(shí)候立刻采取措施了。

26.(2017·北京卷)There're two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai,

長(zhǎng)江之行和泰山之旅都被強(qiáng)烈推薦。

27.(2015·全國(guó)乙卷)The newspaper carries articlesabout the cultures of their home countries.

報(bào)紙登載了朋友們寫的關(guān)于他們國(guó)家文化的文章。

28.(2015·重慶卷)I'm more than delighted when learning about the projectBookcrossing.com where participants can share their books.

我很高興得知一個(gè)由Bookcrossing.com組織的項(xiàng)目，在這個(gè)網(wǎng)站上參與者們可以分享他們的書。

Step 4語篇妙用

在下列完整的語篇練習(xí)中，適當(dāng)、正確地運(yùn)用謂語動(dòng)詞和非謂語動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語態(tài)。

（2017·全國(guó)丙卷）假定你是李華，你所在的校乒乓球隊(duì)正在招收新隊(duì)員。請(qǐng)給你的留學(xué)生朋友Eric寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)他加入，內(nèi)容包括：

1.球隊(duì)活動(dòng)；

2.報(bào)名方式及截止日期。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Eric,

Yours,

Li Hua