學(xué)生風(fēng)采展示板

學(xué)生風(fēng)采展示板

My Favorite Subject

Knowledge is power. We all know that knowledge is very important to us, so we study lots of subjects, such as Chinese, maths, as well as English. To me,English is my favorite subject, because I think it is the most interesting subject. If I can learn English well, I can study abroad and learn more about foreign cultures.That will be really interesting! What’s more, I can also enjoy English songs and movies! When I’m free, I often listen to English songs and try to remember the words. If I have any dif fi culties, I will ask my English teacher for help. I believe I can have a lot of fun by learning English!

江蘇省連云港市羅陽中學(xué) 七年（5）班 許晴

陳傳光老師點(diǎn)評(píng)：

本文的第一句話就很有力量，這給全文奠定了一個(gè)好的開頭。在這篇小作文中，許晴同學(xué)為我們介紹了她最喜歡的科目——英語。其中，小作者闡述了自己喜歡英語的原因——她從英語學(xué)習(xí)中收獲了很多樂趣。本文充分運(yùn)用了初一所學(xué)的知識(shí)，并能夠?qū)χR(shí)點(diǎn)加以適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣?，是一篇?yōu)秀的習(xí)作。

My Pet Cat

I have a cute cat named Lily. She was only three months old when she came into my home as my birthday gift. She is black and white with two big black eyes. As a baby cat, she is quite energetic and naughty, running here and there. I often play with her. Balls, ropes and stones are all her favorite toys. But sometimes, she is gentle. She may sit there silently and wash her face carefully. Each time when I come back from school, she will always jump onto my knees and rub my hand with her small nose. My pet cat brings me so much happiness. She is my best friend.

江蘇省連云港市羅陽中學(xué) 七年（2）班 朱貴智

陳傳光老師點(diǎn)評(píng)：

本文是一篇介紹家中寵物的文章。文章描述了小貓的外表和性格，并運(yùn)用了大量的動(dòng)詞來表現(xiàn)小貓的活潑可愛。全文洋溢著作者對(duì)寵物貓的喜愛之情，是一篇不錯(cuò)的學(xué)生習(xí)作。

Why My Favorite Pet Is Special

My favorite pet is a lovely dog. I bought him last year from the pet market.

He has long ears and a long body. He is very small and weighs about one kilogram. He is very active and often wants to catch everything. Every day, he runs here and there. But if you want him to do something, he will also be a very good boy.

Unlike other dogs, my little dog likes eating bread instead of meat. He also likes chasing balls and chewing shoes. He hates taking a bath and he will run away when he sees water.

He is lovely, but sometimes he also causes me some trouble. He really likes going out to have a walk by himself. So sometimes I have to spend a really long time fi nding him.

Oh, where is my dog? Sorry, I must leave right now and look for him again.

江蘇省連云港市羅陽中學(xué) 七年（5）班 張盼

陳傳光老師點(diǎn)評(píng)：

本文所描寫的是自己最喜愛的寵物。文章分段描述了寵物的各個(gè)方面，包括其外貌、性格與生活方式等。全文整體設(shè)計(jì)合理、語句通順、構(gòu)思巧妙。另外，文章的結(jié)尾富有戲劇性，讓人能夠回味一笑。

教師簡介

陳傳光，中學(xué)英語一級(jí)教師，于江蘇省連云港市羅陽中學(xué)任教，已從事教育教學(xué)工作多年。陳傳光老師是江蘇省教育學(xué)會(huì)會(huì)員、連云港市優(yōu)秀教育園丁及連云港市教學(xué)工作先進(jìn)個(gè)人，獲得過英語專業(yè)技能大賽市一等獎(jiǎng)。其亦在各核心和主流期刊上發(fā)表過多篇論文。

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