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作文選登

感謝各位老師和同學(xué)給豆豆寄來(lái)的作品。現(xiàn)在我們一起來(lái)好好欣賞這些優(yōu)秀的文章吧！

Four Seasons in a Year

There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter.

Spring is a beautiful and colourful season in the year. It is warm. Leaves and grass become green. Animals come to play. Birds sing happily in the trees. We like going to play outdoors in spring.

Summer is a very hot season in the year. We can go swimming in the swimming pool. That's very interesting. We can also eat ice cream. It's very delicious.

Autumn is a golden season. People in America call it “fall''. Leaves and grass all turn yellow. And some of us like to fy kites in this season because it's always windy.

Winter is usually cold. It is usually windy and cloudy. There are some places in China where it snows. When it snows, we can throw snowballs and make snowmen with our friends. That's so much fun.

Every season is beautiful. I like them all!

鄭紫瑜

廣州市荔灣區(qū)環(huán)翠園小學(xué) 六年級(jí)

指導(dǎo)老師：洪巧鳴

豆豆：春夏秋冬四個(gè)季節(jié)你最喜歡哪一個(gè)？我們的小作者每一個(gè)都喜歡呢！文章描寫了四個(gè)季節(jié)各自的特點(diǎn)和每個(gè)季節(jié)有趣的戶外活動(dòng)，一個(gè)個(gè)歡樂(lè)的畫(huà)面躍然紙上。文中使用了“總—分—總”的寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，又面面俱到，同學(xué)們?cè)趯懽髦锌梢越梃b。

My Bedroom

Welcome to my house! This is my bedroom. I study and sleep here.

The wall in my room is blue. There is a picture of my family on the wall. There is a desk against the wall by the window. It's pink. There is a lamp（臺(tái)燈）and a book on the desk. The chair is under the desk. There are some beautiful fowers on the window. They're red. There is a bookshelf on the left of the desk. There are many books. I like doing some reading after doing my homework. There are three trophy cups（獎(jiǎng)杯）from dancing competitions（比賽）on the top of the bookshelf. I like dancing very much. The bed is on the right, next to the desk. It's purple, green and yellow.

Do you like my bedroom? I like it very much.

黃子琪

廣州市白云區(qū)三元里小學(xué) 四年級(jí)

指導(dǎo)老師：潘玉桂

豆豆：在這篇作文中小作者熟練地運(yùn)用表示方位的介詞，準(zhǔn)確地介紹房間的空間結(jié)構(gòu)，再加上精心繪制的圖畫(huà)，讓大家一目了然。參觀她整潔又漂亮的房間真是一種享受呢！

I Have a Cat

Hello, my name is Wen Zhiying. I have a cat. It's very cute.

My cat's name is Mimi. She's hairy（多毛的）. Her hair is brown and white. She has a round face. The two eyes are brown and very sharp（敏銳的）. She has two pointy（尖的）ears, too. They look like triangles（三角形）. Her nose and mouth are small. There are some long whiskers（胡須）beside the mouth. The whiskers help her catch the mice. Her nose has a keen（敏捷的）sense of smell. Mimi has a long tail, and it shakes a lot. She has four claws（爪子）. They're very sharp. Mimi likes cleaning her body with her tongue. She likes sleeping in the daytime and working at night. Mimi is good at climbing up and down. Sometimes she is at the top of the house, and sometimes she is on a tree. Mimi likes sleeping with me.

I love my cat, and my cat loves me too.

溫志穎

廣州市白云區(qū)三元里小學(xué) 四年級(jí)

指導(dǎo)老師：潘玉桂

豆豆：這篇描寫貓咪的文章同樣采用了“總—分—總”的結(jié)構(gòu)。開(kāi)頭指出貓咪最大的特點(diǎn)——可愛(ài)，接下來(lái)從貓的各個(gè)部位和習(xí)性來(lái)闡述這一點(diǎn)，最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)和升華。其中對(duì)貓咪的刻畫(huà)很細(xì)致，仿佛它就在我們眼前慵懶地舔著自己的毛發(fā)呢！

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