放飛夢想

放飛夢想

中考百日誓師大會，一個鼓舞人心的日子，一個讓回憶不斷涌入的日子。百日后，他們將結(jié)束這場備考馬拉松；百日后，他們會踏入自己的理想高中，一步一步實現(xiàn)自己的夢想……在放飛氣球的那一剎，他們也正放飛著自己的夢。在本期“學生風采展示板”，廣州市育才實驗學校的初三學生們道出了自己在百日誓師時的感受。我們要相信，努力會有回報，而那三年間美好的一點一滴也會永存于每個人的心中。

100-Day Countdown

It goes without saying that the last 100 days is precious to us. We have already studied in our junior high school for nearly 3 years. Something happened to us， which told us to cherish all we have and study hard for the future. It is called 100-Day Countdown.

On March 5th， we held a ceremony. We let our balloons fy to the distant sky， just like our dreams which will come true in the future. Some students wrote down their favorite senior high school， while others encouraged each other. Everyone has his dream.

Maybe my eforts will also take a vivid form some day. The pains after the long-distance race and the tears I fow will be paid. Some people told me that something called fate can't be changed，but I think eforts can change everything.

I believe the sufferings are temporary and the value of them is permanent. I will try my best and make myself regretless.

初三（2）班 石慧熙

朱楓老師點評：本文行文流暢，簡潔清晰地講述了小作者在初三百日誓師活動當天的所見所感，表達了其為中考目標全力以赴的決心。文章中詞匯和句子的表達集中體現(xiàn)了小作者的語言功底，如“It goes without saying that...”“while”“precious”和“sufferings”等表達。另外，定語從句及賓語從句的靈活運用也給這篇文章加分不少。

An Unforgettable Experience

I am musing through memories， wondering how time few so fast. It seems that we haven't been in school for too long， but actually there are only one hundred days left for us to study here. After another one hundred days， we will take the senior high school entrance examination.

Last Tuesday was an unforgettable experience for all of us. Our school launched an activity to inspire the students' spirit and give encouragement to both teachers and students. We were all in high spirits. We yelled the vow out loud. We walked across the playground confidently with big smiles on our faces. We set the balloons free and watched them fying away， hoping our dreams will be achieved. The school was full of enthusiasm and determination.

My thought flew to the very day three years ago. We said goodbye to our primary schools and stepped into Yucai Experimental School， starting to meet new friends， face new environment and deal with diferent problems. Time fies， we really have to bid farewell three months later. However， I'm so thankful for my luck to meet all of you and spend the memorable years with you. Maybe in this September， I won't see your faces and hear your laughter， but I will hold all the memories deep in my mind.

Although one hundred days count down，it is enough for us to get ready for the examination as long as we cherish every minute. In this period， we may feel like giving up， but just think of the efort we have made. These three years is like a marathon. Now we're in the most crucial part of this longdistance race， therefore， all we have to do is to carry on with courage.

Though it is hard， I believe we can work together to make it through. Just remember to cherish the last one hundred days we stay together， and keep fighting for our dreams. Dreams are never far away， the key is whether you have the courage to pursue it.

初三（2）班 劉可昕

朱楓老師點評：文章以第一人稱的角度講述了百日倒計時當天小作者參加活動的感受，字里行間無不流露著小作者對學校的熱愛，以及師生間的不舍之情。文章中間由“My thought flew to the very day three years ago.”讓讀者的思緒和小作者一起回到三年前剛進入初中校門時的情景，不禁讓人感慨時光飛逝，須得好好珍惜最后美好的初中時光。