“今天天晴朗,花兒處處香。跟著咱爸媽,來把公園逛!”張瀟雪在逛公園時(shí)看到了什么呢?
It is sunny today. My mother, my father and I are going to a park. We like the park very much. It is very big and beautiful.
When we get to the park, we see many people having a good time there. Look! An old man is sitting on a bench(長椅). He is reading a newspaper carefully. Two boys are playing with a ball. Their mothers are talking with each other(互相). Two birds are flying in the sky. Some ducks are swimming in the lake. What is the cat doing? Oh, it is running after a mouse. What a poor mouse!
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指導(dǎo)老師 白 娟
哈哈,原來張瀟雪在公園里看到了正在讀報(bào)的老人、正在玩球的孩子,還看到了自由飛翔的小鳥、在湖里嬉戲的鴨子和一只正在追逐老鼠的貓。真是太有趣了!當(dāng)你在描述眼前正在進(jìn)行的活動(dòng)時(shí),記得用上現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)哦。