“將要”放假了

孟天賀

假設(shè)你是李艷，請你給英國的朋友Susan寫一封信。在信中，你告訴她五一勞動(dòng)節(jié)要到了，你們要放3天的假。你準(zhǔn)備和父母一起去海南旅游。你將用新買的照相機(jī)拍許多照片。你的英語口語不是很好，你想讓她給你提一些提高口語的建議。

要求：1.在信中要體現(xiàn)提示的全部內(nèi)容。2.正文40詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Susan,

How is everything going with you?

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I hope you can keep healthy and happy every day. Write to me soon.

Yours,

Li Yan

解題思路：

首先，要根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容，組織好寫作的順序。其次，要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)。在描述將要發(fā)生的事情時(shí)，應(yīng)使用一般將來時(shí)。最后，要注意把提示的全部內(nèi)容體現(xiàn)在這封信中。

參考句型及短語：

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學(xué)生習(xí)作：

Dear Susan,

How is everything going with you?

May Day is going to come.I am going to have a three-day holiday. I am travelling to Hainan with my parents. I amgoing to take photos with my new camera.Im not good at spoken English. Could you give me some ideas about it?

I hope you can keep healthy and happy every day. Write to me soon.

Yours,

Li Yan

點(diǎn)評：

本文內(nèi)容完整，條理清晰，用詞比較準(zhǔn)確，體現(xiàn)了提示的全部內(nèi)容，是一篇成功的習(xí)作。但有一處錯(cuò)誤需要改正：May Day is going to come. 應(yīng)改為May Day is coming. 在英語中g(shù)o, come 等詞用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)表示將來的動(dòng)作。參考范文：略